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Smoking Red Arrows

By sparky1
This is a picture taken on the 13 September 2012 in the Guernsey Air Display. I was lucky to get in a great position high up in Castle Cornet which is a fortress on the East coast. They come so close to the castle, you could almost touch them.

Tags: Red arrows planes air show Sports and action

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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NDODS Plus
5 4.9k 125 United Kingdom
16 Sep 2012 10:30AM
A great aeronautical display, captured extremely well. My only suggestion would be to clone a strip of sky to the bottom and right hand section of the image in order to produce a more balanced composition. "A classic fine white border may in order also?"

Regards Nathan

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RTR 7 8 8 United Kingdom
16 Sep 2012 7:23PM
A classic red arrows pose,
left you a modification with some critique, hope you don't mind.

Rich
paulbroad 8 110 1010 United Kingdom
16 Sep 2012 7:42PM
Classic Arrows shot. Well composed, I would just leave it as is.

Paul
Philo Plus
6 99 83 England
16 Sep 2012 8:13PM
Composition is fine by me but it is about 1 stop under exposed. Mod offered with this corrected.
Phil
Jestertheclown 7 7.2k 249 England
16 Sep 2012 8:16PM
I'd leave the composition too.

As Phil says though, it is underexposed.
SWMahy 7 21 2 United Kingdom
16 Sep 2012 9:16PM
Fine shot IMHO. Looks sharp too. I agree it looks a little underexposed but this is easily corrected. Just be careful not to blow the highlights.
Steve.
16 Sep 2012 9:17PM
Thank you for your comments. I agree with you about the under exposure, but I was hoping that the under exposure of the arrows brought the smoke out a bit more, but I like the composition. I've looked at the modifications and I like them. Without criticism I would not get any better, so I thank you for taking the time.

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