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Southern Rock Agama

By RobLouw
This skittish little fellow was shot on a rocky outcrop of the Robberg Peninsula near Plettenberg Bay in South Africa in early January. I wanted to be sure that I had sufficient depth of field to keep his whole body and the rock he was sitting on in focus and chose an aperture of f/11. The background was quite far away and was fairly well blurred but there were distracting brown patches. These were cloned out and a fair bit of gaussian blur was then applied.
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Tags: Close-up and macro Wildlife and nature

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ErictheViking 5 124 102 Scotland
13 Mar 2013 10:32AM
I think you've done a great job on this Rob, as you've cropped to a letter box type image I think it could crop a bit tighter to help see some of the amazing detail on the lizard.

Maybe also consider a further crop to concentrate on the lizard head again to show off the detail against your blur background.

To demonstrate I've loaded 2 mods.

Tell me what you think.

Erik Grin

ps tried the second crop and didn't like the results so just 1 mod loaded.

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Hermanus 5 4 South Africa
13 Mar 2013 10:35AM
This is a lovely photo !!
cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
13 Mar 2013 11:57AM
great detail..agree about the crop Smile
pamelajean Plus
12 1.1k 2016 United Kingdom
13 Mar 2013 4:38PM
I think you admirably achieved your goal, Rob, of getting the whole of the lizard in focus, and have done some nice work on the background.
The tones immediately suggest a hot barren landscape, and I like the lizard's strong shadow too.
I like the way he is holding his feet away from the rock, probably because it's very hotTongue.
I think the image is excellent, and there is only one small thing that I felt might improve it. There is a part of the rock on the left which is quite dark, and which runs along the top of the lizard's tail, and I feel this spoils its outline. I have therefore done a modification where I cloned it out. I also tried cropping a little off either side, bringing the edge of the rock into the bottom right corner, being careful not to crop too close to its tail, and still leaving space in front of it. I did a bit more cloning on the top right corner just to clean it up a bit. I find that when cloning a background like this, it's best to use a very large brush and take large chunks from elsewhere. I also removed a few small black spots from the rock.
paulbroad 10 123 1244 United Kingdom
13 Mar 2013 4:52PM
Yes, nice job. A first class record of the critter. My first thought was the background looks very neutral and I now see what you have done. However, it looks pretty good and sets him off well. May be the background could have been a bit darker?


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