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By luckybry
trying some stuff for a abstract comp

Tags: General Transport Specialist and abstract

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marktc Plus
6 96 15 United Kingdom
14 Dec 2011 11:37AM
I get it... great image!

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NEWMANP 9 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
14 Dec 2011 12:01PM
i can see what you were after but im not sure it fully came off.

firstly its all a bit complicated with the red stuffin the foreground and the depth of field is too great and its allowing other subjects in the background to come through quite sharply and is taking attention from the spokes.

i think you needed to close in on detail, much tighter framing and use a wider aperature to reduce the depth of field and throw the background out more.

im struck by the young chap in period dress walking into view and thinking what a great shot he would have made with spokes as a background.

its a brave attempt and the venue looks great but im sorry its not working for me.
paulbroad 9 123 1161 United Kingdom
14 Dec 2011 1:16PM
A good try but the background is cluttered and far too distinct. You needed something like f3.5 or greater and, even then, I suspect the background would not have been far enough out of focus. Possibly widest possible angle, very close and from a low viewpoint?

PattiW 11 24 2 United States
14 Dec 2011 3:06PM
Especially like the crop on this, Patti
Chinga Plus
6 3 1 United Kingdom
16 Dec 2011 11:15AM
I like the image! It's metal heaven!

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