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steam train at Grosmont, North Yorkshire

By ianmartin1960
new photographer experimenting with equipment. Applying usual rules of photography such as thirds, triangles, diagonals etc. Constructive comments always welcome

Tags: Transport Landscape and travel

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Briwooly 10 452 5 England
2 Mar 2012 4:19PM
It's well composed and nicely exposed for the steam looks good


Brian.................

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Sooty_1 6 1.5k 219 United Kingdom
2 Mar 2012 9:21PM
Well exposed and sharp enough, but the right half of the frame is wasted, for me. This is a fabulous subject that needs to fill more of the frame. Cropping vertically near the edge of the white structure will balance the composition somewhat.
A vertical orientation suits the subject as it's quite narrow, but the rest is fine as is.

Nick
Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
2 Mar 2012 9:56PM
Agreed, in fact I modded this before I read Nick's comment.

It's a shame that there's a guy in an orage suit clambering behind the engine. Other than that though, I reckon that it's pretty good.

Bren.
AndyD999 4 43 6 England
3 Mar 2012 8:49AM
Really good idea and love what you have done with it. But i do prefer the MOB by Jester. I also think that the colours need to pop just a little more. If the green was a little bright and stood out a bit more for me it would be a really good picture!
AndyD999 4 43 6 England
3 Mar 2012 8:50AM
I would also clone out the white distracting marks on the platform in front of the train
freda 4 United Kingdom
3 Mar 2012 10:34AM
love this picture, its so clear and captures the essence of steam
wow, thanks for all the comments guys. As a "newbie" to photography I have not got any experience in post editing so this photo is as it came out of the camera so to speak. Am learning quick through just "getting out and doing it" but your comments are taken on board (ha ha pun intended) and hopefully I can post some more even better ones on here.
Cheers to all of you Smile
arhab 4 43 2 Indonesia
3 Mar 2012 6:03PM
Full of smoke. You describe it very clear. But, I agree with Bren. Cropping the smoke will make the composition better.

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