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KarenFB Plus
16 5.9k 184 England
11 Oct 2006 5:01AM
I think you have lost some of this model because of the dark top and background. I am sure she is a lovely girl, but her expression looks forced as does the pose. To be brutely honest the young lady is too thin, I feel slightly uncomfortable looking at her. Perhaps if she had sat on/in the car, or if we could see her eyes, or if her hair were down it would give a focus point.
Your profile picture is brilliant. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
11 Oct 2006 2:28PM
it is a good photo but i think it would work better if you used the car to bring out a more expressive pose from the model instead of just having the two standing there insignificantly. i look forward to seeing more of your work.
paulcr 17 1.5k 9 Ireland
11 Oct 2006 2:39PM
I have to agree with Karen, even from the thumbnail I could see how thin she was. Not that that has anything to do with the photo.
But it does detract from it.
dwilliams 15 15
11 Oct 2006 3:00PM
Not very good use of the car or the model perhaps you need to concentrate on one or the other
Hoggle 16 72
11 Oct 2006 3:33PM
A small point, but I would have made sure the model had wiped her knees clean befor this shot... very distracting.

Also, not enoough contrast between her top and the background - it merges into one.

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