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Stood on a breaker

By DLBphoto
picture taken while stood on a breaker.

Tags: Beach General Breaker Landscape and travel Groin Wildlife and nature

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saeidNL 6 3 Netherlands
1 Apr 2010 7:41PM
beautiful image and great composition.
saeid

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Natzdad 7 29 2 United Kingdom
1 Apr 2010 7:43PM
nice,,,,,,,Mick
MB63 7 England
1 Apr 2010 8:23PM
Nice shot!
Marc
clicknimagine 6 221 88
2 Apr 2010 8:16AM
you have a lovely point of view in this shot, love the lead in too, but compositionally it would have been better, if you had considered a few points,

the lines are leading the eye to the outside of the scene, it would have been better if you had given some space there in the expense of the foreground where the blurred post has a slight distraction, the foreground posts are not clearly in focus, and you point of focus is on the 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th posts and around that area, if you count it from the foreground,

i have uploaded a modification here, i have adjusted the level, because your image is looking slightly overexposed to me, and cropped out the lower part of the image slightly otherwise your image will be very small, i have also increased the sharpness a bit, but i am unable to do any other thing,

wish you best of luck for your future works...
paulbroad 9 114 1049 United Kingdom
2 Apr 2010 8:35AM
I do prefer the mod moving the breakwater to the side. You needed to remove the tiny bit of breakwater at the bottom,and include the end as a stop point at the top.

Otherwise quite a strong image. I often think, simple is best.

Paul

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