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Stop it!

By adentenur
pic friend of mine. when we were hunting at the middle of night
v2 is the color version.
which one do you like?

Tags: People Black and white Portraits and people Black and white

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banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3771 Canada
21 May 2012 4:59PM
I like the mono. I also like the bokeh discs, but some viewers will look at them as distractions rather than enhancements. I would like to see his fave slightly brighter, and sharpener, and it can benefit with a little space cropped from the top, as in the mod. I tilted the mod a little more too, - the tilt is something I like, - gives the shot a more dynamic feel than a straight shot.



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21 May 2012 5:08PM
I like the color because of the shade of orange color on the face which adds to the happy mood. Deep
adentenur 5 9 Indonesia
21 May 2012 6:41PM
is the bokeh disc not inthe right place?
what do you mean by tilt?

@deep bhatia

banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3771 Canada
21 May 2012 8:27PM
The bokeh is great, like it.

The tilt, - youve taken the shot at an angle, tilting the shot towards the left. In the mod, I increased the tilt a little more.

pablophotographer 6 804 304
22 May 2012 9:56AM
Nice composition and lines play, vertical, horizontal, diagonal, a play of light and shadow. Monochrome for me brings in this occasion the best out of it.

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