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3 Jun 2004 5:45PM
Nice shot. Simple but effective.

Click,
Gav

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3 Jun 2004 5:50PM
Welcome to ePZ Laura, this is a great start, I can almost taste that! Klicked K.
gwynann 12 72 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2004 5:51PM
Welcome to the site, lovely first upload, great colour and love the pink background,
Click click.
Gwyn
mrcal 12 1.0k
3 Jun 2004 5:52PM
A good first one. Excellent colour, nicely sharp, well lit.

Welcome to EPZ, the best place I've found to learn about photographs.
trahern 13 863 United Kingdom
3 Jun 2004 5:59PM
Welcome - good capture - keep them coming.
geoffash26 12 2.5k United Kingdom
3 Jun 2004 6:08PM
Great 1st upload well done and welcome
Geoff
moo 13 1
3 Jun 2004 6:16PM
Welcome, very good first up-load.

The only things I would change are the background has a sight pink cast over it, if you've got Photoshop elements the 'enhance'/'auto colour correction' is very effective at correcting this kind of thing. The only other thing, and I'm being really picky now is that the stem is just a little long and tends to pull your eye out of the picture. All that said it still a very good shot.

James
3 Jun 2004 6:37PM
Oh please James, don't discourage at someone's first upload. I love this shot - it's crisp, colourful and very effective. Well done, Laura Jayne, keep at it.
3 Jun 2004 6:53PM
Wow, thanks evereyone for the comments, a real encouragement.

Laura
dani2 12 45
3 Jun 2004 6:55PM
So simple, so effective. If it was a poster I would buy it. Click.

Dani
Love the colour and simplicity of this shot.
Regards
Clive
jage 13 2 Wales
3 Jun 2004 7:32PM
Great 1st image, really striking
jage
brianb 12 12
3 Jun 2004 8:02PM
I agree that this is an excellent shot - great clour rendition, lighting and in razor sharp focus
moo 13 1
3 Jun 2004 8:51PM
sujaleel

I would hate to think my suggestions were taken as discouragement, far from it. I always try to be contructive with any comments made. I thought the whole point of the site was to get the opinions of others.
vfr400 15 886
3 Jun 2004 9:17PM
I like this a very good first image, for the next time try a piece of white card opposite the kight source to bounce some light back this should light the straberry more evenly and reduce the hard shadow.
Welcome to EPz you'll soon be addicted.
chris
3 Jun 2004 10:43PM
Well done Laura and pass me the cream please.
3 Jun 2004 11:25PM
Mouth watering, and the image is pretty darn good too *click*
geegee 12 29 England
7 Jun 2004 6:38PM
Lovely first upload Laura, real texture to the fruit, can almost smell strawberries and cream.

(Many thanks for your comment on my gentians, I had not spotted this upload until then. If you comment more on other folks' uploads they will start to look at yours. Thanks again).
obmitty 11 12
7 Jun 2005 9:52AM
James, that is the point of this site, and your comments are rightfully also very constructive! Don't stop! Without out people like you the site would become a pointless exercise in false praise.

By the way, I think this is an excellent shot, I don't personally have a problem with the pink tint, but do think chopping off the brown end of the stem may have improved it slightly. Perhaps You can still do digitally. With a pale background, a border may also inhance the picture for display on this site.

By the way, its true that adding comments will get you clicks, but your picture has done extremely well with out you having to drum up attention, while other members on this page average 50 comments per a gallery up load to get the same number. I think your image is speaking excedingly well for itself!

As your first upload you've now raised our expectations. An Excellent portfolio is now expected!

Well done

Tim

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