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Buffalo_Tom 10 2.3k 9 Wales
26 Dec 2008 8:59AM
Love the concentration on the ladies face,excellent mono and dof Patricia.

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CarolG Plus
10 199 20 Greece
26 Dec 2008 9:10AM
Beautifully captured, Patricia. Hope you had a good day yesterday. Carol
User_Removed 13 16 1 United Kingdom
26 Dec 2008 9:12AM
I like the diagonal crop on this it gives n extra dimension to the portrait.

AlanBW 11 20 England
26 Dec 2008 9:31AM
Excellent angle and superb concentration
rontear Plus
14 8 8 England
26 Dec 2008 9:46AM
Intense concentration, soft lighting works with mono Patricia. Ron.
IanA 13 3.0k 12 England
26 Dec 2008 9:46AM
I like the subject and angle/composition very much. The DOF is spot on, but I feel the background distracts a little, reducing the impact of the image.
It's the OOF black blotches of the windows that are doing it!

I don't know if the shot was set up or candid (the lighting is spot on, so tempted to think it was set up) but with the B/W treatment the background could be less contrasty bringing out the subject a little more.
Cracking effort though.

26 Dec 2008 10:20AM
Thanks Ian, Actually it was a candid in a town square in Portugal. Very strong sunlight reflecting off everything.
I did reduce the background contrasts, but perhaps you're right, a little more might have worked better.
I would have preferred to move a little to the right, but there was a great black lamppost that I couldn't avoid.
I'll put the original in the variations.
IanA 13 3.0k 12 England
26 Dec 2008 10:47AM
That just shows how wrong I can be!! Wink

jenquest 14 561 1 Tokelau
26 Dec 2008 10:51AM
I really like what you have done with V1. Shows so much concentration.
Adobecs 11 114 England
26 Dec 2008 11:15AM
Great photo, version 1 for me.
banehawi Plus
13 1.6k 3667 Canada
26 Dec 2008 4:19PM
This is an excellent conversion Patricia, and the crop is also well done, removing much of the background.

I dont see any issues at all with the blurred background, - perhaps it an issue of monitor calibration. I also wish that lamp post wasnt there!

Diana 10 2.0k 19 Netherlands
26 Dec 2008 9:59PM
V1 is so much more personal

NEWMANP 9 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
27 Dec 2008 8:44PM
well i have read the above and looked at both versions, in my opinion, the colour version fades into insignificance beside the excellent mono version. in V2 the colour, the background distract from the strength of the portrait and remove significance from the main focal area including the powerfully placed neck of the guitar,
in colour, the guitar case, details in the paving, row of people all attract too much attention as they are sharper and in contrasting colour.
In V1, the mono conversion, excellent in its own right had been supplemented by the softening of the background and a tighter, more effective crop which concentrates attention on the beautifully arranged triangular composition of the eye to frets , down the neck of the guitar and back to the face,
This is a classic case of taking something ordinary in the camera and turning it into something special, i hope it scores high.
27 Dec 2008 9:44PM
i like th e dof field youve done like the corner shot
Well done
28 Dec 2008 7:47AM
fatherpie 9 18 12 England
28 Dec 2008 8:32AM

Quote: in my opinion, the colour version fades into insignificance beside the excellent mono version.

I'm with Phil on this. I loved the image from the thumb nail but seeing the original makes the conversion all the more impressive. A well observed moment complemented by excellent processing has made this a stunning candid in my mind.
andy210966 9 4 119 Wales
28 Dec 2008 4:36PM
This is a lovely shot and I am glad to be number 30! Congrats on the RC.

thorn 12 124 2 Scotland
28 Dec 2008 5:00PM
Hi Pat,
I like both shots,but i prefer the b/w as this one makes the girls hair and face stand out as it does the fingering,concentration,expresssion,candidness and the b/g does not detract from the musician.Great angle,dof and presentation.take care,AnnSmile
looboss 10 3.1k 7 United Kingdom
31 Dec 2008 4:30PM
Oh Yes! the B&W for def!! works very well.
ketch 9 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
1 Jan 2009 5:42PM
The colour original works well enough - but I think how clever to spot the potential for a tighter mono crop. So many of us would be happy with the original and not continue looking for perfection, which I think the B&W is.

It has superbly strong diagonals (I would have been tempted to get these working left to right by flipping the image - how sneaky is that?) - the mono treatment makes the eye linger on just the three key components: guitar head, hand and head and of course all three are completely interconnected. This make the image hugely powerful.

Great piece of work IMO

User_Removed 13 17.9k 8 Norway
2 Jan 2009 6:14PM
The mono version is by far the better interpretation Patricia. Well done.
porty2003 13 97 Scotland
2 Jan 2009 8:06PM
Great 'study'.No1 for me.
jonathanbp 9 99 Thailand
4 Jan 2009 4:05AM
V1 for me, superb mono - Jonathan
22 Jan 2009 1:16PM

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