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Sun bather at White Rock BC CA

By DouglasMorley

Tags: Seaside Candid portrait Sunbather Portraits and people

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Jestertheclown 7 7.4k 249 England
9 Oct 2011 10:28PM
This is a pretty good record of a day in the sun!
The road in the background is a bit of a distraction though, as is the girl in the water.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've ctroped the top and RHS, removing the road and I've cloned out the girl.
I've also increased the contrast very slightly and sharpened it prior to uploading. That's not to say that your shot is unnecessarily soft, rather that my mods. always seem to suffer during the upload.
There appear to be some areas of discolouration in the water. Reflections perhaps?
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
12 Oct 2011 7:49AM
This is a fine well composed candid, but you did need that bit of work. Clone out the girl on the right and crop the top to remove the road etc.

Paul

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