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Sunday Walk

By pollini
Hi All, Let me share the view I was given on last Sunday Walk on the south coast of England with the stunning view of beachy head cliffs. Hope you like it.

Tags: Wildlife and nature

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JuBarney Plus
5 20 3 United Kingdom
29 Apr 2013 10:00PM
Wow, you picked a good day!
A beautiful seascape so well captured.
Ju

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3558 Canada
29 Apr 2013 10:20PM
A lovely scene, and a gorgeous day. The bright sky and reflection from the cliffs caused a need for some exposure balance that Ive done in the mod. The lower area is a touch dull and the image looks great when this is sorted out, and the cliffs have highlights toned down.

Its a wish I was there image.

W
johnlw 10 1 10 United Kingdom
29 Apr 2013 10:29PM
Stunning shot nice bit of processing.
Regards John.
Mike43 5 17 21 England
30 Apr 2013 5:55AM
The perfect composition, with the gates which takes you into the picture and the white cliffs, beautiful. I agree a little with banehawi maybe a little more Contrast/Color, but this is just nit picking.
Mike.
derrymaine 3 17 Greece
30 Apr 2013 7:07AM
fantastic colors
salopian Plus
5 2 21 United Kingdom
30 Apr 2013 10:06AM
Very much a "wish I was there" image. I have to say I much prefer the original colours, as the mod has come out rather yellow ( on my screen ) The only suggestions I can make are that you could crop a little off the foreground grass perhaps and if one of the gates could have been left open ( temporarily!) it would have been easier to "go through" into the scene, but as Mike says this is only nit picking and the original shot is lovely.

Geoff
mrswoolybill Plus
10 990 1514 United Kingdom
30 Apr 2013 10:38AM
A classic 'invitation' composition. It asks us in to explore. If you look carefully you have a broad zig-zag leading from the bottom left up into the frame. The edge of the rough grass through to the fence and gate; then left along the top of the foreground; then right along the cliffs, and finally back left over the headland. That leads the eye through the frame, in a gentle, slow, meandering fashion. Very satisfying.
Willie has dealt with brightening the land, I'd perhaps like to lighten the sky a bit, just to distinguish it from the sea. I may have time later.
Moira
mrswoolybill Plus
10 990 1514 United Kingdom
30 Apr 2013 11:40AM
I've uploaded a quick Mod - I increased brightness and contrast a bit, and used the burn tool on the foreground grass to bring it forward.
Then I isolated the sky using the magnetic lasso and in colour adjustments I lightened cyan and blue. I think this pushes the sky back into the distance. To my eye overall the Mod gives a better sense of distance. See what you think.
Cheers,
Moira
paulbroad 9 117 1077 United Kingdom
30 Apr 2013 3:40PM
Nice in general but missing a complementary colour for me. A person leaning on the fence in brightly coloured coat. Super pictorial record but missing a subject.

Paul
30 Apr 2013 10:45PM
Thank you all for your comments. Banehawi, I now see what you ment but your mod seems to be over burnt to kind of orangee yellowish color as salopian says. Mrs woolybill made a good separation which I like better. Paul you opened my eyes yes now I see something catchy and popping is missing there. Next time I will think about that.
Thank you very much for your critique it means much to me.

cheers.

Pavol

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