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SunFlower

By vdzine
One of the gifts of summer

Tags: Flowers and plants

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RonnieAG Plus
6 153 116 Scotland
26 Aug 2010 5:42AM
Have taken the liberty of offering a Mod, Victor. Not sure what you will make of it! But hope you might like it.
Ronnie.

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benlee 6 46 4 United Kingdom
26 Aug 2010 6:09AM
Hi,

Great capture of all the colour - that's a really vibrant sunflower!

The space out to the left of the photo is unnecessary and almost a little distracting. I like how you have used DoF to blur the background but because the background is also yellow I feel it kind of interferes with the petals of the flower.

I think Ronnie's mod gets in spot on - I like the effect of the square crop as it loses the background and emphasises the curve of the petal.

Also, at first glance I didn't even see that wasp/ bee on the petals so it might be worth while to remove it. Now I can see I wish I hadn't.

I like the colours and the photo but I think with a slightly tighter crop the impact of the photo is greater.

My thoughts,

Ben
paulbroad 9 114 1045 United Kingdom
26 Aug 2010 4:45PM
Very nice image and a joy to see someone get in close and crop hard. I like your original, I like the mod even more.

Paul
vdzine 6 United States
26 Aug 2010 5:13PM
Ronnie, Ben, Frank and Paul,
Appreciate your feedback very much, in my opinion the beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, some like it hot and some like it cold! My original thought was that "sun" ought to have space for it's glow!

Thank you all, please keep sending your thoughts, it is a great way to connenct

Victor
Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
26 Aug 2010 9:59PM
Those colours are spectacular!

As for the composition, I personally prefer the original uncropped version with regard to the flower's position.
I would however, do some serious blurring and some de-saturation with the background.

Bren.
RonnieAG Plus
6 153 116 Scotland
27 Aug 2010 11:33AM

Quote:Ronnie, Ben, Frank and Paul,
Appreciate your feedback very much, in my opinion the beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder, some like it hot and some like it cold! My original thought was that "sun" ought to have space for it's glow!

Thank you all, please keep sending your thoughts, it is a great way to connenct

Victor



I think your comment is perfectly valid, Victor, but in order to let it glow as you describe, it would still be a good idea, I feel, to dull down the b/g a bit, so I have offered a second mod. with that in mind. Do you prefer Mod 2 to Mod 1?
Ronnie.
Jestertheclown 7 7.3k 249 England
27 Aug 2010 12:00PM
The mod I didn't have time for last night!

As I said above, I prefer the original in terms of composition so I've kept its original dimensions. To lift the colours even further, I separated the bloom from the back ground using the magnetic lasso and increased it's tone by about 20%.
Then I lassoed the background, reduced the exposure -0.3, reduced saturation -15 and applied gaussian blur at 15px.

Hope it's OK.

Bren.
27 Aug 2010 11:29PM
hi there, ive had a go at a mod for you, something different though, ive gone for a sepia look...

Not sure i'm qualified to change others photos as im new to all of this and just starting out in the big wide world of photography.

hope this mod gives you food for thought though..

all the best

stu,
vdzine 6 United States
23 Sep 2010 1:22AM
Thank you all friends,
All your feed back was very educational, hope you will continue to.
Fall is at the doorstep here in Milford, NH and that time of the year when thousands flock to see the nature'e glory

vdzine
HectorRivera 9 17 1 United States
8 Mar 2011 6:55PM
Impresive. Amazing color

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