Back Modifications (3)
Views 41 Unique 20 Award Shortlist   

Sunset walker

By Madoldie
This was taken yesterday evening while out on Fistral beach, I was playing around with the aperture settings when this fella walked across my line of vision and I thought that I would put him in the photograph.

'Portrait Photography' Competition - Win A Samyang 85mm F/1.4 FE II Lens!

Comments


dudler Plus
19 1.9k 1947 England
23 Apr 2017 8:50PM
My immediate thought is too much compression, or too much processing...

There is an odd fringing effect in the area round the sun, and there's a halo all along the horizon and round the figure. Would it be possible to upload an unprocessed version? I'd like to leave a mod (possibly cropping a little at the top and playing with Levels and Saturation) until there's a version that hasn't been processed to work from.

Basic settings are pretty sound, though the -1 compensation won't have helped anything but the sun's disc. This shot would benefit from being shot as a RAW file, and processed to control the high contrast range.

mrswoolybill Plus
15 3.3k 2536 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2017 9:10PM
Same here. It's a good composition, and well timed. I like the way the man's head rises above the horizon but he is looking down. The angle in the knee, stepping forward, is perfect.

But this definitely looks over-processed and over-sharpened to me. Tell-tale signs: there's a light halo along the horizon and around the man's head, there's banding around the sun, and the sea horizon is razor-sharp. Think about looking out to sea, the horizon is soft, mysterious. It's mystery that is lacking for me.

Could you upload the original please?
Moira
Madoldie 8 586 United Kingdom
23 Apr 2017 9:58PM
Thank you both, I will upload the original tomorrow as I've been at work today and very tired. I look forward to seeing you're modifications. Can you also upload more than one photograph a day to the critique gallery, I know that you can only do one a day to the main gallery.
Thanks for your time,
Mat SmileSmile
mrswoolybill Plus
15 3.3k 2536 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2017 7:25AM
Mat, you can only upload once a day to the Critique Gallery, but you can add the original as a version (you have Plus membership), or as a modification. When something has been significantly processed it often helps a lot if we can see the original.
Madoldie 8 586 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2017 8:48PM
Hello , sorry in been a while had a busy day, just uploaded the original photograph, thanks for that mrswoolybill. Hope you get time to have a look, very interested in what you think.
All the best,
Mat
Madoldie 8 586 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2017 8:55PM
That's not the original, just need to try and sort this out a minute ................
Madoldie 8 586 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2017 9:13PM
Right think that I've sorted it, modification 2 is the original photograph.
dudler Plus
19 1.9k 1947 England
26 Apr 2017 6:37AM
Thanks for the original photograph, Mat.

Looking at it, it's clear that your processing has caused the halos, because their absent from the original. There's a little bit of banding, which I suspect is due to quite a lot of compression of the file. You may have that camera sent to a relatively low quality, or you may have chosen a more compressed option when saving the JPEG.

I've done a mod correcting the horizon as you did with the original, tweaking levels, and not doing any sharpening. My crop's a bit different from yours, but that the variety rather than anything else.

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.