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Welcome to ephotozine.
A word of advice when doing self-shots. After you focus looking on your mobile or your camera, look at the (imaginative) viewer of your picture; in this specific one, your picture would look more engaging if you had looked at the mirror.
Some may complain that it is not straight, I would say it would be also nicer if you had included your left hand fully in the frame. The space at the bottom for the tap could have been used to present the top of your head.
All the best Vanessa.
A word of advice when doing self-shots. After you focus looking on your mobile or your camera, look at the (imaginative) viewer of your picture; in this specific one, your picture would look more engaging if you had looked at the mirror.
Some may complain that it is not straight, I would say it would be also nicer if you had included your left hand fully in the frame. The space at the bottom for the tap could have been used to present the top of your head.
All the best Vanessa.

So why exactly have you uploaded a 'Facebook' pic into a critique forum on a photographic site? Do you really want photographic critique on this picture?
Sorry, but you might have mentioned that you want to improve your photography rather than your career aspirations, which would have been better placed in a 'hello' thread in the appropriate forum.
Good luck on improving your photography.
Nick
Sorry, but you might have mentioned that you want to improve your photography rather than your career aspirations, which would have been better placed in a 'hello' thread in the appropriate forum.
Good luck on improving your photography.
Nick