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Super Nessa

By NessaBoo
Hey im vanessa! im young i want to become a nurse or doctor n make a life out of it

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pablophotographer 11 2.1k 432
16 Jul 2012 11:47PM
Welcome to ephotozine.

A word of advice when doing self-shots. After you focus looking on your mobile or your camera, look at the (imaginative) viewer of your picture; in this specific one, your picture would look more engaging if you had looked at the mirror.

Some may complain that it is not straight, I would say it would be also nicer if you had included your left hand fully in the frame. The space at the bottom for the tap could have been used to present the top of your head.

All the best Vanessa.
sherring 15 46 13 United Kingdom
17 Jul 2012 8:50AM
Agree with the above.

Welcome though.

Steve.
Focus_Man 12 481 631 United Kingdom
17 Jul 2012 2:59PM
Good luck with whichever career path you decide upon.

Frank
Sooty_1 12 1.5k 221 United Kingdom
17 Jul 2012 4:07PM
So why exactly have you uploaded a 'Facebook' pic into a critique forum on a photographic site? Do you really want photographic critique on this picture?

Sorry, but you might have mentioned that you want to improve your photography rather than your career aspirations, which would have been better placed in a 'hello' thread in the appropriate forum.

Good luck on improving your photography.

Nick

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