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Swaledale Barns

By geffers7  
I went to Swaledale with the intention of capturing some moody shots between showers - don't think I quite got that but I've uploaded a colour and a black and white version of a typical stone wall leading to two disused barns. I would welcome feedback on whether the B&W works.
Thanks
Geoff
P.S. - I'm not very expert at converting to black and white so any suggestions are welcome.
p.p.s. - should have said that they are not the same shot but taken very close together.

Tags: Landscape and travel

Voters: Georden, saeidNL, chazcherry and 15 more


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Georden 9 11 England
7 Jul 2011 5:11PM
Great image!

George
saeidNL 11 3 Netherlands
7 Jul 2011 5:16PM
Two Beautiful and well composed image,
saeid
ripleysalien 14 1.2k 11 United Kingdom
7 Jul 2011 5:26PM
I figured out they wernt one shot as there is a slightly different composition and the skys are different.
I would say the B/w image would work with a little more tweeking, the land and sky contrast ranges are very different in your shot, that said its a great effore and the only way to learn is to do what you like to your images.
It depends on your choice of software as to how you edit the image.

Steve
geffers7 Plus
10 53 1 United Kingdom
7 Jul 2011 5:45PM
Thanks Steve - I've tweeked it some more in Elements - think it looks better.
Geoff
lobski 9 2 1 Philippines
7 Jul 2011 6:00PM
Great DOF and lovely shot!

Fred Grin
andylea 12 37 1 United Kingdom
7 Jul 2011 7:25PM
great comp geoff wonderful detail and colour v1 for me today nice one Wink
andy
AnnChown 11 207 1 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2011 7:06AM
I do like v1 - the green and the grey skies are super.
Ann
geffers7 Plus
10 53 1 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2011 8:14AM
Thank you Fred, Andy and Ann - much appreciated.
Geoff
Anna62 9 1 Australia
8 Jul 2011 11:47AM
I love these walls. Takes me back to a village in Greece I visited years ago. Version 2 for me today Smile
geffers7 Plus
10 53 1 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2011 5:27PM
Many thanks Anna - there are quite a lot of those walls in Northern England!
Geoff
9 Jul 2011 12:11PM
Excellent composition using the wall to take the eye up to the barns. Version 1 for me.

I do think the barns could have played a greater part in the image and cropped a bit of the foreground wall, Swaledale is known for it's barns.
geffers7 Plus
10 53 1 United Kingdom
9 Jul 2011 1:42PM
Thanks Gavin.
Geoff
wolfy 17 36 United Kingdom
11 Jul 2011 10:40AM
Nice comp and lead in lines, ive uploaded a mod taken from the color version, converted in silver effex pro in cs5 and tweaked in elements
geffers7 Plus
10 53 1 United Kingdom
11 Jul 2011 10:50AM
Thanks Wolfy - really like the sky on your mod.
Geoff

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