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Swirled Orchid

By jjnxyz
A twist on this beautiful and exotic jewel

Tags: Flowers and plants Flower photography

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mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.7k 2395 United Kingdom
2 Apr 2021 7:23AM
Hello again. You have ticked for critique again, but you have not responded to comments and questions on yesterday's dahlia. On that upload, for critique purposes, we need to know what processing (or perhaps in-camera effect?) you applied, what your intentions were, and we need to see the original as a modification.

We need the same here! Again the colour processing looks extreme - look at those purple / magenta areas creeping in and the outlined edges of the petals. Again the clipping of petal tips looks accidental rather than creative.

Without knowing what you have done, and what effect you are aiming for, and without seeing the original, there is not a lot more that we can say to help you.
Regards,
Moira
chase Plus
15 2.1k 562 England
2 Apr 2021 10:26AM
Hi Joseph.
This is really not working for me, sight of the original ,as mentioned on your previous upload would help.
To offer any constructive comments, we do need to know what you have done to this and where you were trying to take it.
Without input from you we really cannot go any further.
dudler Plus
17 1.6k 1832 England
2 Apr 2021 10:41AM
I feel much the same as Janet and Moira: this isn't appealing to me a lot as it stands, but perhaps if I know your intentions I may see more in it.
dark_lord Plus
17 2.8k 761 England
2 Apr 2021 11:53PM
It would be helpful for critique, and interesting for other members, if you could describe your intentions and the processing that you did here. What effect were you after? Do you think the processing applied has worked in that respet?

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