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conrad 11 10.9k 116
24 Sep 2008 8:32AM
I'm not keen on portraits with missing hands, but other than that I really can't fault this - well done!

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ChrisV 9 1.3k 26 United Kingdom
24 Sep 2008 3:26PM
I like the photography.

Is the cover a mock-up? Because I'm afraid the design is quite stunningly awful and rather detracts from, rather than adding anything to the image. Sorry to sound so negative.
NickParry 10 1.0k 79 Wales
24 Sep 2008 4:58PM
Well here goes.

Simplicity is the key.

Why the writing? Add writing by all means if it add to the image. As it stands it ruins it. Sorry.

It would make a great image without the text and mock-up cover.

A cover style has to be done really well to work.

Lets look at the image itself. Great eye contact, nice location, good pose, good colours and tones. So perhaps upload it without the writing.

I dont aim to be negative, but want to speak honestly and say it how it is.

Nick
NickParry 10 1.0k 79 Wales
24 Sep 2008 5:21PM
Mod added to show how the original shot would look without the writing. I think it looks good without the writing.

Nick

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