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By youmightlikethis
a real snappers playground in finnieston glasgow around the science centre and glagow imax

Tags: Specialist and abstract

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Carabosse Plus
13 40.2k 269 England
25 Mar 2010 11:37PM
Hi Ian. This is a decent enough capture of the 'shapes' and personally I prefer the colour version. But I am just a little doubtful of a couple of things.

Firstly, I am not sure the photo on the top right really contributes to the montage. It may have been better to have photographed a completely different structure. Secondly the presentation is, to my eye anyway, a bit heavy (the big black and white borders)and could, arguably be more imaginative. It is the borders which tend to catch the eye rather than the pictures!

In the mod I have uploaded for you I have corrected a very slight cool cast, increased contrast via a curves adjustment and, perhaps most importantly, rearranged the photos, reduced the borders and changed the black to dark grey. Obviously there could be any number of variations on the arrangement.

Hope that helps.

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thanks for crit and mod

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