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By sarac  
My first real go at paintshop elements with the encouragment of Kaybee (thank you). I like the original image which was also an early go with a fill in flash. I put a larger catch light in the eyes and softened apart from the eyes/lips with the teardrop tool.

Tags: Woman Self portriat Portraits and people

Voters: Morpyre, julesm, Atlas and 10 more


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mic5cott 10 1
20 Jan 2006 6:10AM
You're getting there Sara, your perseverance is paying off, well done.
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20 Jan 2006 6:42AM
Not bad at all
doug_7 11 482 England
20 Jan 2006 7:58AM
yep, I agree, a pretty good shot.
d.
sarac 11 63
20 Jan 2006 8:10AM
Ive loaded the wrong one! opps the one I was supposed to load was finished off on the left!
kaybee 12 4.9k 25 Scotland
20 Jan 2006 9:59AM
Nice one Sara.

I think you may have your head tilted slightly too much (others will no doubt disagree)........and you look very serious (very hard to do anything else in a self portrait I imagine - not having the courage to do it myself) ------ so I have changed that in a modification

Roy
20 Jan 2006 10:08AM
I can tell where you've altered the background a bit. I know you are only beginning in PS but a tip I picked up a while ago with backgrounds is if you add an adjustment layer and then darken using the burn tool it works better than anything else I've tried to far.
If you open PS and then click on Layer on the top menu bar then click new adjustment layer then click 'curves' you will get a box with a diagonal line on it you need to click in the middle of the line and drag it so that it lightens your picture (you will then be able to see the errors in the background more clearly). Over to the right of the screen you will have a layers palette where you should see your original image and also the adjustment layer if you click on the original image within the palette then choose the burn tool from the editing palette you can burn in the background so that it becomes even. Just a note of caution dont have the brush either too hard or too dark, better to build up gradually. To do this once you've clicked on the burn tool near the top of the screen will be the word Brush: with a number next to it (this is the size) click on that and you can adjust the hardness of the brush. Further along the top of the line is the opacity setting where you can either increase or reduce the strength of the tool. Hope this helps. K.
Jaye 10 3
20 Jan 2006 12:47PM
Like the rich colour you have used good contrast
sarac 11 63
20 Jan 2006 10:34PM
thanks AOAP will try this when I get back from work!

sara c
Sus 12 3.2k 9 England
22 Jan 2006 12:23AM
Good one. The tilt of the head looks a bit awkward, particularly with your clothes blending into the background.
Morpyre Plus
12 1.6k 8 Wales
30 Jan 2006 1:37AM
great looking portrait of you - the black background and soft subtle lighting really work to make a nice image - good work with the little adjustments

keep up the great work =)

peter "morpyre" turner

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