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The Love Letter

By Canadiann
Hello everyone, hope you are all well. Here for you to consider this time is my attempt at a little bit of poetry in the form of a love letter. Now I have my E2 membership at long last, I am hoping you will enjoy this in it's larger size. It was not easy trying to get the balance between pictures and the poem. This design is meant for the poem to be the emphasis here and not the photo. However I have tried to balance the two. Hope I have at least made a half decent attempt. Love to hear all your comments, suggestions and ideas. As I always learn from them and enjoy reading them so much. Thank you so much for the previous comments which I found so encouraging.
Take care and I will do so catching up over the next few days.
Ann XXX

Tags: Flowers General Letters Poems Love Romance Digitally manipulated Digital Art

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Comments


peterkin 13 626 England
16 Mar 2011 10:27PM
Lovely, Ann. I'm no critic but it will do for me because it appears to be from the heart. It's very thoughtfully presented.

Best wishes,

Peter

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EMJAYCEE Plus
7 10 10 England
16 Mar 2011 10:31PM
Hi Ann, Hope you're keeping well. I like the roses and the presentation, but find it very hard to read the verse. Think I would prefer this on a plain background. If it was intended as a card I would expect the verse to be on the inside. I'm not being picky - it's just how I see it.
Joan.
EAS 7 1 13 Scotland
16 Mar 2011 11:00PM
Tend to agree with Joan. I love the actual Rose image and would like to see it presented minus the words and the additional frame. You doubtless already know, I like "simple" with floral images!

Ann
Anjantoo 8 7 1 England
17 Mar 2011 12:19AM
Congratulations on becoming an EPZ member!
I must agree with above, I love the roses and I love the poetry but just a bit distracting together!
Jann
xxx
andylea 8 37 1 United Kingdom
17 Mar 2011 12:24AM
beautiful colours and detail ann beautiful words a cracker nice to see it large Wink
andy
NeilWigan Plus
6 13 15 England
17 Mar 2011 12:53AM
looks like a well made valentines card ,not the best judge ,never send them.hope your ok .
CarolG Plus
10 198 19 Greece
17 Mar 2011 5:18AM
Love the design, Ann, but the verse is difficult to read in places, particularly where it overlaps the border. Also, not sure what 'ru7stling' is Wink Carol
RonnieAG Plus
7 153 116 Scotland
17 Mar 2011 12:03PM
Very nicely compiled image, Ann: I tend to agree with some others in that with my dicky eyesight the text is not easy to read. But what I can read suggests your talents extend well beyond photography and image processing. Very well done.
Ronnie.
Canadiann 6 2 Canada
17 Mar 2011 12:42PM
LOL LOL LOL. well what a disappointment I knew it was a risk putting the two together but that was my vision. It was supposed to be a love letter as the title suggests. Not a card this time lol.
I had great difficulty with the balance as I have said. Getting the writing to show enough but not yet to overpower the picture too much. The size of the writing was difficult too. Too small and very hard to read, too big and it became overpowering. I thought i might have overcome this and got it about right. My eyes are not the best either, but could at least read it, except I guess I missed the spelling mistake in rustling as Carol managed to find lol, thanks Carol. Well I really do appreciate your honesty everyone. I took a chance and failed. That is life I suppose. Will try another version later when i get my confidence back lol. Sad
Love to you all
Ann.
PattiW 11 24 2 United States
17 Mar 2011 1:32PM
Beautifully romantic and excellent work, Patti
TrevBatWCC Plus
8 12 10 England
17 Mar 2011 2:35PM
Despite some of the text being a little difficult to read, it's a beautiful creation, and a lovely piece of poetry, Ann - very well done Smile
Trev Smile
AshTree 7 1.7k 6 England
17 Mar 2011 7:17PM
Ann it's a beautiful image and a beautiful poem, but I have to agree with others that they really don't work well together in this format. But hey, don't let it rock your confidence, there's no reason for it to as you are a very creative person and this is, I believe, the first time I've been a little negative about your work!

On another note, welcome to E2 world!!

Theresa
18 Mar 2011 9:33AM
Hi Ann.
Lovely to see you back Smile
Beautiful image
Rick
21 Mar 2011 7:56AM
A clever idea once again, Ann, I too found the verse hard to read, maybe if the picture was more translucent and the verse in the middle it would have worked, but that is only my opinion.
Roy
Glyn1 7 4 1 England
21 Mar 2011 12:50PM
Beautifully done Anne.

Glyn
1 Apr 2011 12:04PM
nice work and good imagination maybe if you add more of a black border to the right of the grat image you coul;d make it more like a card and then it would be easy for all to read I'm a bit like RonnieAG Ann eyes are going like the rest of me heheh keep it up
Graham TongueWinkGrin
Mynett 8 142 6 United Kingdom
2 Apr 2011 8:23AM
no need to appologise for this brave attempt, the words are lovely and so is the image, just that together they get a bit too busy, perhaps the border was one step too many which has made it so difficult to read.

Linda
cantona43 Plus
11 924 4 England
4 Apr 2011 7:07PM
A wonderful start photo Ann, but I have to agree with the majority on this one I do not think the poem on the photo works it distracts what looks like a stunning photo so a vote for the photo sorry if I have been harsh
Neil
12 Jul 2011 11:39PM
Sorry Ann must of missed this one.Lovely work..Lin

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