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The Moth (revisited)

By chase
A while ago I posted this image and several peeps asked to see the 'unpainted' version.
So, I have revisited, no paint effect but a little lift to the shadows.

I do like the negative space on the right and the effect of the light on the metal bits.
A 3 frame HDR image, each 1 stop apart combined in Lightroom, tidied up and faffed with in Photoshop.

Thanks for looking at the revisited version.
Constructive critique and mods welcome.
Stay safe.
Janet xx

Tags: Red Still life Moth Metal Wood Hdr Daylight Oil can pinking machine embosser

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Comments


charlesym 17 4 United Kingdom
9 Dec 2020 11:52AM
Love this. I particularly like the strong lines.
ZenTony Plus
5 4 1 United Kingdom
9 Dec 2020 11:58AM
Absolutely stunning Janet.
Tony
Disee Plus
11 25 United Kingdom
9 Dec 2020 12:26PM
A beautiful picture Janet, simple yet powerful.
Dinah
TrevBatWCC Plus
12 13 17 England
9 Dec 2020 12:36PM
I did like the original, but prefer this of the two...just! 😃👍
Trev 😀
chase Plus
15 2.1k 539 England
9 Dec 2020 1:17PM
Thanks all.
Special thanks to Tony and Dinah, wonderful to have your User Awards, very complimentary.
Janet xx
chris-p Plus
15 73 England
9 Dec 2020 2:16PM
Liking this version Janet
adagio Plus
2 3 2 England
9 Dec 2020 4:01PM
I liked the "painterly" version but I have to say I like this better, perhaps because of the stronger lines.....!!

Angela😄
ardbeg77 Plus
16 1.2k 7 United Kingdom
9 Dec 2020 4:17PM
Such a clever composition, with the three matched 45 degree angles of the handles (sorry - don't know what all the implements are!). Agree with you about the negative space - draws the eye in to the detail until you finally see the moth. The light is something else - subtle but enough shadow to pick out the detail. Great work.

Steve
bricurtis Plus
15 2.4k 51 England
9 Dec 2020 6:13PM
Prefer this one Janet. It's a great comp and in that light the clarity is superb.
Brian.
chase Plus
15 2.1k 539 England
9 Dec 2020 6:23PM
Thanks everyone.
Steve and Brian, thank you so much for your UAs, so very much appreciated.
Janet xx
dudler Plus
17 1.5k 1805 England
9 Dec 2020 7:27PM
Very nice indeed!
chase Plus
15 2.1k 539 England
9 Dec 2020 7:29PM
Hi John, great to have your UA, thank you.
richmowil Plus
12 437 2 England
9 Dec 2020 7:47PM

Quote:Very nice indeed!


I agree!
gpimages Plus
10 65 2 England
10 Dec 2020 8:30AM
I don't think I saw your earlier version, but this is very good Janet. Clearly a lot of thought went into the set up.
Graham Wink
10 Dec 2020 9:01AM
Like this very much, the little moth is a great touch too.
David
chase Plus
15 2.1k 539 England
10 Dec 2020 3:51PM
Thanks all.
David and David, wonderful to have your UAs, many thanks, very complimentary.

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