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The Pinnacle

By dpenman    
I captured this on my last trip to Death Valley National Park. I was looking for side lighting to give detail to the sand and the dunes, so I was up before sunrise and found this little gem.

Tags: Landscape and travel

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debu 7 India
10 Jan 2013 3:18AM
Very nice landscape.

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Andysnapper 9 109 25 England
10 Jan 2013 6:47AM
Superb composition, great image.

IanBurton 8 81 7 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2013 8:18AM
A fine example of less is more. Well done.
widtink 5 406 2 Scotland
10 Jan 2013 8:30AM
stunning love it Smile composition is fantastic

Mike43 6 18 21 England
10 Jan 2013 9:16AM
For me there is no sense of scale to the Sand Dunes, and the composition is not to strong neither, which is a shame because it sounds a great location.
Focus_Man 7 481 631 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2013 9:49AM
Mike has hit the proverbial nail on the head here, the lack of scale means this could be anything from what it is to a pile of salt on a table. A camel or a figure would do very nicely here to provide that information together with some detail in the sky like maybe just darker and a little more of it.

EXIF is good for what you were attempting it just needs something to provide scale.

banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3769 Canada
10 Jan 2013 3:04PM
Shapes and curves, light and shadow I like, but I wonder why not colour?

banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3769 Canada
10 Jan 2013 3:12PM
Uploaded a couple of mods.

paulbroad 10 123 1195 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2013 7:29PM
You are passing comment on your own image, little gem. Afraid not for me. I would have stayed with colour and gone for some contrast and a deep blue sky. This is a very subjective image, and one man's gem is not necessarily anothers.

ErictheViking 5 124 102 Scotland
10 Jan 2013 11:14PM
Hi Dustin, I like this image but for me the B+W is lacking contrast. In colour it would be a wonderful combination of sand yellow tones complimented by the blue sky colouring. Here for me its all about the shape and the contrast. I have loaded a mod to demonstrate what I mean, I realise it may not be what your looking for but I hope it shows my thoughts and intentions.
I have increased the contrast and brightness through the levels layer, this brings more definition to the shape of the dune itself, I then used the dodge and burn tools to bring some extra emphasis to the sand itself.

banehawi Plus
13 1.7k 3769 Canada
11 Jan 2013 1:17AM
I dont believe the sand is actually yellow in this location, more white - buts its a while since Ive been there. Definitely no camels!


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