Back Modifications (2)
Views: 54 (0 Unique)  Award Shortlist   

the race

By youmightlikethis
another re edit

Tags: Portraits and people

Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS
  • REVIEWS
  • INSPIRATION
  • COMMUNITY
  • COMPETITIONS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here


USA Landscape Photographer of the Year 2016 open to entries NOW!
This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

Comments


clevercloggs 12 237 2 United Arab Emirates
30 Sep 2006 5:10PM
why did you choose for the upcurled corner?

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

it was to get rid of unwanted detail in corner of image [see mod]
Tooth 11 5.8k 227 Ireland
30 Sep 2006 11:51PM
i think you show the intensity and concentration of the race well, but I feel the paper curl is totally distracting. I'd agee from looking at the original that what was in the corner was also distracting. It'd be nearly impossible IMO to clone anything in there convincingly, so I think the best option would be to just crop from the left. Yes, you'd lose one of the contorted faces, but there's enough going on in the other ones that the loss could be sustained

HTH

Stephen
thanks for comment stephen is mod better or worse
Tooth 11 5.8k 227 Ireland
1 Oct 2006 10:58AM
personally I think it's better Ian, but more important, do you? Smile (anyone else?..)

Cheers

Stephen
whipspeed Plus
12 4.2k 22 United Kingdom
1 Oct 2006 1:04PM
I prefer the closer crop, but I personally don't like the blue mono treatment, the highlights have blown, it's also a shame that the girl in front is not in sharp focus. I also don't like the curled paper effect.

Sarah

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.