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The Red Arrows

By TakeTwo
I took this picture a little while ago. The Red Arrows were doing some fantastic maneuvers. I just wish I had a better camera instead of my little point-and-shoot.

Tags: Photo journalism Action General Abstract Planes Documentary Sports and action

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Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
19 Apr 2010 10:35PM
See my mod.

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19 Apr 2010 10:53PM
Unfortunately I had a wrong camera on me at the time, so I had to pay in quality. Thank you for modifying it, it looks much better.
Jestertheclown 9 7.6k 252 England
19 Apr 2010 11:14PM
A pleasure.
Given time I would have blurred the smoke trails slightly and the same with the aircraft on the left which now doesn't look as it should.

Edit; sorry, I've just realised you're a new member. Welcome to Epz.
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.
pamelajean Plus
11 1.0k 1966 United Kingdom
20 Apr 2010 4:25PM
Hello, Roxy, and welcome to EPZ. Your camera did quite well, and there is good detail on the planes, but the colours in the trails has been diffused a lot by the bright sky background. Although the planes stand out nicely against the white, it's not ideal, and Jestertheclown's modification is an excellent idea. However, I would like to have seen more sky at the top of the frame, for the planes to fly into, so have done a modification FROM the other one, adding canvas to the top.

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