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Super mono image, great detail and texture
Its beautiful. You should really post in the General Gallery, - not a lot we can help with from a critique perspective.
Though, I did upload a mod with the back level pulled down a touch more, and highlights slightly reduced.
Great work
Regards
Willie
Though, I did upload a mod with the back level pulled down a touch more, and highlights slightly reduced.
Great work
Regards
Willie
I like your composition on this one, George, part of me sees it as flowing hair, and part of me sees it as curtains.
The simplicity of black and white enables the eye to explore the flow, texture and curves, and their interruption by knotted rope and a beam of wood.
I assume these nets won't be used again, so there is a certain sadness to the scene, as well as a feeling of neglect, within which is still beauty, rather like a scene from Great Expectations (Miss Haversham's house).
I agree with Willie, this could do well in the Main Photography Gallery.
Pamela.
The simplicity of black and white enables the eye to explore the flow, texture and curves, and their interruption by knotted rope and a beam of wood.
I assume these nets won't be used again, so there is a certain sadness to the scene, as well as a feeling of neglect, within which is still beauty, rather like a scene from Great Expectations (Miss Haversham's house).
I agree with Willie, this could do well in the Main Photography Gallery.
Pamela.
I have a feeling this may be your first post in the Critique Gallery, George... Welcome!
You've been a member a good while, so I'm sure that you know what we do here. And, using a Pentax 645Z, I suspect that you know what you're doing, and there's not a lot we coudl advise you on that you don't know already...
Technically, it's as good as I'd expect from a camera like htat - so you clearly know how to use it! My only comment is that the borders are quite broad, and make the image itself rather small - though a white border and grey background set off the picture nicely.
Was there anything that you wanted, specifically.
You've been a member a good while, so I'm sure that you know what we do here. And, using a Pentax 645Z, I suspect that you know what you're doing, and there's not a lot we coudl advise you on that you don't know already...
Technically, it's as good as I'd expect from a camera like htat - so you clearly know how to use it! My only comment is that the borders are quite broad, and make the image itself rather small - though a white border and grey background set off the picture nicely.
Was there anything that you wanted, specifically.
Being me, I agree it is technically competent. Content? Really not for me. I see nothing to hold my attention or any interest and the effect is a lot of mid tone grey and no focal point.
purely subjective and probably because i am technically trained.
Paul
purely subjective and probably because i am technically trained.
Paul
