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By stevepd150
Felling almost complete in an Estonian forest.

Tags: Flowers and plants Landscape and travel Trees clouds

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ketch 12 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 May 2008 10:40AM
This is a very difficult image imo - it tells a good story - but the fg trunk (which is of course essential to the story) doesn't do us any compositional favours. There is a lack of colour variation and contrast and even the textures are all a little 'samey' The mg and skyscape are both excellent but if you try and crop bottom up as in my mod you start to loose the sense of the trunk. Got me beat to be honest.

Best wishes

Robert

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steve_r 12 England
13 May 2008 10:41AM
GOOD SHOT.Nice Image,well captured regards Steve.
Lou_C 12 755 2 England
13 May 2008 11:14AM
Sorry Robert I have to say I like the composition of the original better Smile But I agree with a little more contrast
ketch 12 770 50 Turks And Caicos Islands
13 May 2008 11:41AM
I complely agree (head bowed in shame) - I am sure there are buttons on PS and PSP that will do this. Apologies Steve for uploading a second class mod but it might just give you a few ideas anyway?

Robert
saveme 16 115
13 May 2008 7:29PM
The foreground tree trunk looks a little soft to me. Maybe a smaller aperture would have corrected that? Also, I think the time of day you took the shot has led to a rather flat image- taking earlier/later would create more interesting shadows etc.
anpix 11 88 United Kingdom
13 May 2008 8:38PM
Lovely composition
15 May 2008 4:02PM
Thanks for your comments.
Robert, thanks for the revision, I like it and have learnt from it, I dont know why on earth I framed the stump in the middle !
Thanks,
Steve
CarolB4 11
4 Jun 2008 8:42PM
Well done, lovely composition and interesting sky.M
sneal 12 6 7 United Kingdom
20 Jul 2008 9:50AM
I agree the lighting is a bit flat, but overall a good image. Take a look at look at my mod - and effort to add contrast to fg and sky.
Steve
Cor 10 Belgium
9 Oct 2010 7:04PM
Well spotted and taken +++++
cor

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