Time to Stand and Stare

By crookymonsta
I am thinking of putting in for the LRPS and trawling back through my files to find a reasonable number of images from which to make up the selection of 10 needed.

This one, taken in Slovenia last summer, was one I kept going back to but did nothing with, so I decided to convert it to mono. Would love to know what you think.

Edit: Many thanks for the comments/suggestions, I have done a V2 which has been given a little more contrast and removed the offending spoke from the umbrella, which I hadn't even spotted!

Tags: Black and white


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Comments


11 Jan 2013 11:50AM
It is very well composed with a good expression. Try increasing the contrast by about +50.

Good luck with your project

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WhiteRose1 Plus
6 1.6k 148 England
11 Jan 2013 12:13PM
The mono works well, the idea is excellent, the shade through his head might be problematic.

Dave
Dinky65 3 1 United States
11 Jan 2013 12:32PM
I like the B/W shot and it makes me time like age is just a number with all the different times displayed on the clocks.Wink
helenlinda Plus
9 344 22 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2013 1:58PM
An interesting selection of clocks but its the light through the leaves that makes this work for me SmileSmile
Helen
ChiliMan Plus
10 135 17 Singapore
11 Jan 2013 4:09PM
Yup...V2 works better, Sandra. Excellent shot to begin with and I love your title Smile

Andrew
11 Jan 2013 5:44PM
V2 is a great improvement..
but what a great candid image
wish this was mine
11 Jan 2013 6:38PM
V2 is definitely better
fcc 8 3
11 Jan 2013 6:41PM
Good work
tomcat 11 6.4k 15 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2013 7:53PM
V2 definitely SandraSmile

Pity he didn't set the clocks to the same timeWink

Adrian
marktc Plus
6 86 14 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2013 8:37PM
Nice work on V2 Sandra, good luck for the LRPS.
pamelajean Plus
10 969 1846 United Kingdom
11 Jan 2013 9:03PM
I think the man is perfectly placed and you show a nice array of his wares. The background is unintrusive and subtle. V2 looks a lot better.
Rock Plus
14 10 2 England
11 Jan 2013 9:03PM
V2 has the slight edge.

Rock
WhiteRose1 Plus
6 1.6k 148 England
11 Jan 2013 9:34PM
v2 a lot better, Sandra.

Dave

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