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mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.9k 2455 United Kingdom
9 Aug 2013 9:48AM
This needs colour first off, for the contrast between hot red and cool grey shadows, and I think it needs the red detail within the shadowed area for balance. So V1 for me. I like the way the frame divides vertically into two zones, but the red in the cycles brings harmony.
You've blurred the background rather aggressively, the fall off in focus from sharp to extreme blur is rather sudden, and there's a halo left round the areas that you have isolated. Look in particular at the top of the hanging basket bracket and the base of the dustbins and yellow bollard. Tidy those areas up and you have a much more satisfying image I think. I'll try a Mod.
Moira
Satiny 8 16 United Kingdom
9 Aug 2013 9:55AM
ok thanks
Satiny 8 16 United Kingdom
9 Aug 2013 10:37AM
added a mod after your comments
thanks
mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.9k 2455 United Kingdom
9 Aug 2013 5:12PM
Yes, your Mod is a definite improvement on V1.
Moira

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