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Tokyo Bridge

By toonblade
A black and white repost. I tried a high pass filter followed by USM as suggested by a few helpful members on here.
All feedback/critique gratefully received thanks

Tags: Japan General Bridge Night Black and white Tokyo Landscape and travel

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Tooth 13 5.8k 227 Ireland
19 Nov 2006 6:18PM
I think the mono treatment's OK, except that I think in the conversion process you've lost some useful detail. I think the dark foreground is quite distracting the way it's just in dark shadow and kind of cuts off the legs of the bridge. I think at least you could pull out more detail in the strip of water below it so it's clear it's an island. A bit of work with a carefully applied curve and a bit of dodging on the island itself to drag out whatever detail's there should help - or go back to the colour one and apply the curve there first to bring out some detail and then convert?

Just my thoughts, hope they're some use


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toonblade 13 27 United Kingdom
21 Nov 2006 12:54PM
Thanks for your time and comments Stephen, I'll have a crack at that and repost. I'm still stumbling through the whole processing thing!

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