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transaction on boat

By yudhanh
at traditional market on lok baintan villages

Tags: Boat Transport Traditional Seller Buyer

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LynneJoyce Plus
9 20 99 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2012 6:25AM
How fortunate for you that the position of the boats makes such a wonderful composition. Lovely image.

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6 Mar 2012 9:37AM

Quote:How fortunate for you that the position of the boats makes such a wonderful composition. Lovely image.

i stand on suspension bridge / rocker for shot this picture, hope you sometimes comes to this place on south borneo,

many thanks for visiting

best regards,

yudha nh
pamelajean Plus
11 1.0k 1952 United Kingdom
6 Mar 2012 9:12PM
You had a wonderful viewpoint from the bridge, Yudha, and the image just wouldn't be the same if taken from anywhere else.
I think your composition is well thought out. I like the colours and the action that is taking place.
Very nicely taken, no critique from me.
I also like the one of the single boat in your portfolio.
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DRicherby 8 269 725 United Kingdom
7 Mar 2012 12:42AM
The natural composition is excellent, though it would be nice to have a tiny bit more space at the bottom, so the nearest boat didn't come quite so close to the edge of the frame. It doesn't need a lot -- another 20 or so pixels at this resolution would probably do it.

For me, the colours are just a bit too much, especially the greens. I'd turn down the saturation a little to make them look more natural. There's also the very strange effect of a green area in the water to the left of the left-most boat, and the same with the pink headscarf. Neither is a reflection because reflections are going to the right. I don't know what could have caused that, unless you added those colours yourself.

7 Mar 2012 1:05AM
thanks all my great friends really support my in photography...


7 Mar 2012 1:28AM

Quote:Lovely colours and composition - incidentally I must have been close to here in 1960 when I called into Balikpapan on a Shell Tanker.


very nice trap shipping frank


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