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Two suns in the sunset...

By JouŠo  
In my rear view mirror the sun is going down
sinking behind bridges in the road
and I think of all the good things
that we have left undone
and I suffer premonitions

confirm suspicions
of the holocaust to come

the rust wire that holds the cork
that keeps the anger in
gives way
and suddenly it's day again
the sun is in the east
even though the day is done
two suns in the sunset
could be the human race is run

like the moment when the brakes lock
and you slide towards the big truck
you stretch the frozen moments with your fear
and you'll never hear their voices
and you'll never see their faces
you have no recourse to the law anymore.

and as the windshield melts
my tears evaporate
leaving only charcoal to defend
finally I understand
the feelings of the few
ashes and diamonds
foe and friend
we were all equal in the end.


Tags: Pink floyd Landscape and travel

Voters: DaisyD50, sherlob, NeilM and 60 more

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DaisyD50 11 3
28 Jul 2011 5:28PM
Wonderful photo.

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Billyray 9 70 3 United Kingdom
28 Jul 2011 5:40PM
A cracking shot with excellent composition. Great detail and colour.
MD2009 7 Wales
28 Jul 2011 5:45PM
Cracking photo well shot ...
Mark ..
JOKEN 8 3 10 United Kingdom
28 Jul 2011 6:09PM
A beautiful image accompanied bt a beautiful poem/
MarkBroughton 10 286 1 England
28 Jul 2011 6:14PM
A beautiful image and great song... cracking stuff.
28 Jul 2011 6:59PM
excelent moment
Georden 6 11 England
28 Jul 2011 7:16PM
Brilliant shot - well done!

JackieB 7 18 3 United Kingdom
28 Jul 2011 7:51PM

jimpy1 8 England
28 Jul 2011 8:05PM
Fantastic image I love it!
Jasper87 Plus
7 1.9k 150 England
28 Jul 2011 8:10PM
Fantastic photo and the brilliant Pink Floyd - what a winning combination, worth a 'white rose'. As long as this isn't your Final Cut!!

Kenfromsot 9 57 United Kingdom
28 Jul 2011 8:54PM

11 12 1 United Kingdom
28 Jul 2011 8:55PM
Truely impressive Jo..with the sublime poem as well to accompany the image.

28 Jul 2011 8:58PM
Stunning light.
Richsr 10 91 223 England
29 Jul 2011 8:42AM
Some nice light and tones in this Jouko.
JouŠo 13 56 Finland
29 Jul 2011 4:03PM
Thank you everyone! Your comments and clicks are much appreciated! Always...............

JouŠo 13 56 Finland
29 Jul 2011 4:05PM
Dave: Thank you so much for your UA! It´s highly appreciated!

LOL @ the Final Cut thing Smile Great album from Floyd!

30 Jul 2011 8:58PM
Stunningly beautiful, terrific image Smile
sawsengee Plus
11 5 14 Malaysia
1 Aug 2011 9:16AM
Thank you for your kind comments....this shot is fantastic.....lovely diminishing light photography, colours & water reflection from a well composed viewpoint
wyeth 6 Scotland
28 Aug 2011 10:22PM

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