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Yesterday I visited the Philip-Lorca diCorcia Street Photography exhibition at the Hepworth, Wakefield. Well worth a visit.
I like the way this looks like a line of small windows that are reflected in the floor.

Jade

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Sigma 28-105mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 Mar 2014 - 2:25 PM
Focal Length:28mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.7
Aperture:f/3.8
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:2500
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Two Way
Username:jadus jadus
Uploaded:27 Mar 2014 - 10:32 AM
Tags:Exhibition, Framed photographs, Reflection, Space, Specialist / abstract
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Votes:24
Voters:dudler · PhilT2 · Joline · dark_lord · morpheus1955 · cats_123 · capto · Nigeve1 · JawDborn · whatriveristhis · woolybill1 · mrswoolybill · SlowSong · Alan_Baseley · Nikonuser1 · ColleenA · sherlob · jamesmoorephotography · Philip_H · Daisymaye · PhillipMinnis · billmyl · jovanovic · djcozzer ·
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dudler
dudler Critique Team 12273 forum postsdudler vcard England551 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 10:36 AM

Minimalist, mindbending, and rather wonderful!

And I can see a panoramic crop lurking in there, as well as this broader view - missing out on the highly structured environment, but really going to town on the pattern of frames!

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Joline
Joline Plus Member 9Joline vcard United States52 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 11:05 AM

Very nice composition, but I would do a simple crop to eliminate the entire ceiling. I think it would make an even more powerful image.

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capto
capto Plus Member 32704 forum postscapto vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 11:43 AM

Very well spotted,works a treat.Smile

ivor

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cats_123
cats_123 Plus Member 114361 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 11:43 AM


Quote: Very nice composition, but I would do a simple crop to eliminate the entire ceiling. I think it would make an even more powerful image.

agree GrinGrin

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JawDborn
JawDborn Plus Member 3858 forum postsJawDborn vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 12:09 PM

A well Balanced composition, in my humble opinion. How about using the spot healing brush to take out the lights?

Another of your well seen and photographed images. Well done, Jade.

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AnneB50
AnneB50  3118 forum posts Scotland18 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 12:10 PM

A really powerful image but I agree with Dudler, a letter box crop would work well here.


Anne

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jadus
jadus Plus Member 31122 forum postsjadus vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 12:41 PM

Hi All
I have tried the letter box crop - and love it! Thanks for the suggestion.

Jade

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whatriveristhis
whatriveristhis Plus Member 283 forum postswhatriveristhis vcard England95 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 1:45 PM

I like the ceiling.... I think removing the lights would be a slightly odd thing to do. I like the idea of the crop too.
It looks like an interesting building. Good photo.

Alan

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 8772 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1263 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 2:42 PM

My first thought on opening - everything so cool and regular, and then that anarchic ceiling going its own way. Keep the ceiling!
Moira

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SlowSong
SlowSong Plus Member 75305 forum postsSlowSong vcard England29 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 3:11 PM

This is how you saw it and this is the way it should stay. I love those reflections in the floor which echo the pattern above. I like the spill of light onto the left wall and of course, the ceiling and little lights make the image more interesting. You don't need to crop out all the little details like that as they enhance the image, as do the gratings in the floor. The murky colours work well. I like this very much and would be pleased to have taken it.
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jadus
jadus Plus Member 31122 forum postsjadus vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 3:53 PM

Thanks Slowsong - that's appreciated.

Jade

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Nikonuser1
Nikonuser1 Plus Member 3Nikonuser1 vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2014 - 6:40 PM

Simple but works well JadeSmile

Cliff

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye Plus Member 6Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
28 Mar 2014 - 6:06 PM

Agree with Dudler. Great image.

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