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dudler Plus
12 349 661 England
27 Mar 2014 10:36AM
Minimalist, mindbending, and rather wonderful!

And I can see a panoramic crop lurking in there, as well as this broader view - missing out on the highly structured environment, but really going to town on the pattern of frames!

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Joline Plus
9 27 52 United States
27 Mar 2014 11:05AM
Very nice composition, but I would do a simple crop to eliminate the entire ceiling. I think it would make an even more powerful image.
capto Plus
3 3.2k 8 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2014 11:43AM
Very well spotted,works a treat.Smile

ivor
cats_123 Plus
12 4.4k 25 Northern Ireland
27 Mar 2014 11:43AM

Quote:Very nice composition, but I would do a simple crop to eliminate the entire ceiling. I think it would make an even more powerful image.
agree GrinGrin
JawDborn Plus
4 922 1 England
27 Mar 2014 12:09PM
A well Balanced composition, in my humble opinion. How about using the spot healing brush to take out the lights?

Another of your well seen and photographed images. Well done, Jade.
AnneB50 Plus
3 118 18 Scotland
27 Mar 2014 12:10PM
A really powerful image but I agree with Dudler, a letter box crop would work well here.


Anne
jadus Plus
4 1.2k 3 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2014 12:41PM
Hi All
I have tried the letter box crop - and love it! Thanks for the suggestion.

Jade
27 Mar 2014 1:45PM
I like the ceiling.... I think removing the lights would be a slightly odd thing to do. I like the idea of the crop too.
It looks like an interesting building. Good photo.

Alan
mrswoolybill Plus
9 839 1368 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2014 2:42PM
My first thought on opening - everything so cool and regular, and then that anarchic ceiling going its own way. Keep the ceiling!
Moira
SlowSong Plus
7 5.8k 29 England
27 Mar 2014 3:11PM
This is how you saw it and this is the way it should stay. I love those reflections in the floor which echo the pattern above. I like the spill of light onto the left wall and of course, the ceiling and little lights make the image more interesting. You don't need to crop out all the little details like that as they enhance the image, as do the gratings in the floor. The murky colours work well. I like this very much and would be pleased to have taken it.
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jadus Plus
4 1.2k 3 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2014 3:53PM
Thanks Slowsong - that's appreciated.

Jade
Nikonuser1 Plus
3 17 10 United Kingdom
27 Mar 2014 6:40PM
Simple but works well JadeSmile

Cliff
28 Mar 2014 6:06PM
Agree with Dudler. Great image.

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