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Uluru 1

By tallkenny
Sunset pic from Ayer's Rock park in Australia

Tags: Sunset Park Australia In From Pic Rock Landscape and travel Night and low light Ayer's

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bfgstew 14 668 105 England
4 Jan 2011 2:17PM
Hi Kenny, welcome to EPZ and the critique gallery.

Nice first upload, a brilliant sunset with those lovely sun rays.

My main problem with this is lack of F/G interest, careful composition needed to find something, either a small bush or rock to catch the eye, looking around this scene there is plenty to choose from. Also the brightness of the sun setting has caused it to under expose the F/G, use of a ND graduated filter would over come this allowing the camera to expose the F/G properly for you.
The horizon is slightly of, again, careful setting up while composing the shot or adjust in post processing.
Trawl the main photograph gallery and you will see some superb landscape shots to compare and get ideas.
I hope this helps in some small way and most of enjoy your photography.

Edit, someone beat me to it on a mod!!! Rule of thirds works wonders, try and place the horizon on one of these lines.
4 Jan 2011 3:43PM
Thanks for the pointers, have had a go at cropping.

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