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Urban Lust

By Simon-Gimson  
ok here is a shot of Beckie and Pav
this is the 1st time i have done a shot like this so all feed back about the pose,angle and any thing about this image would help


taking under Brighton pier no flash just lighting which was there

thank you for taking time to look and all your feed make is welcome .

please feel free to do a mod ( with how you did it )

Si Smile

Tags: Brighton Fashion People Lust Urban fashion Gimson Portraits and people Beckie jo Nude and glamour

Voters: claret, John Giddings, Cormy and 22 more


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Cormy 14 3 England
13 Jun 2008 9:12AM
Nice one.Really enjoyed this,bet he did too.
Cheers
Alan
Simon-Gimson 15 236 1 England
13 Jun 2008 9:16AM
Thanks Alan

Si Smile
culturedcanvas 16 4.7k 59 United Kingdom
13 Jun 2008 9:23AM
OK ... here goes. Doesn't work for me ... the female models positioning is spot on. However the way you have positioned the guy seems almost as an afterthought ... instead of being lusty it appears pervy ... as though the guy is looking for a quick fondle Wink He at least needs to have a touch more face showing ....

Also the outfit the guy is wearing doesnt really work with the models ... by all means go hardcore with the camo but lose the top ... have the guys torso showing or put him in a tight fitting vest .. make him a bit of rough rather than primark chav.

The girls expression is moving towards lust but is still a little vacant for me .. there's not enough emotion and there's no real sense of movement or passion within the shot. Hope those pointers help a little bit ..

Dan
Simon-Gimson 15 236 1 England
13 Jun 2008 9:26AM
thanks Dan
i have got one with his top of but i think he needed tone up much more to get away with it.


Si
kaybee Plus
17 7.9k 27 Scotland
13 Jun 2008 9:34AM
My tuppenceworth .......... I think the clothes work fine - these days you always see the girls made up and wearing posh clothes while the boyfriend is very casual. I don't see 'pervy' in the shot but would rather he had been kissing her neck. Also a wider shot to show the location more - as if they had sneaked off to have some quiet time together.


Roy
culturedcanvas 16 4.7k 59 United Kingdom
13 Jun 2008 9:42AM
Dont worry about being stupidly toned ... not all models have to be Brad Pitt to get the shot to work. Christ I even appear in some of my own shots and I'm 20 stone plus!

Wink
Simon-Gimson 15 236 1 England
13 Jun 2008 6:14PM
thanks Roy
thanks Dan this is all being noted for the next time



Si

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