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Vanessa

By BURNSIE  
Britain and Ireland's next top model finalist Vanessa spent the day with me for my first "real" modelling shoot.

I would welcome constructive comments on my attempts to get into this field of photography.

Kindest Regards
Burnsie

Tags: Portraits and people Nude and glamour

Voters: CarolG, watchart, Photo_Lee and 9 more


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NDODS Plus
6 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
28 Nov 2012 9:27AM
A very professional studio photograph, wonderful pose superb light.

Regards Nathan

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BURNSIE 8 25 4 England
28 Nov 2012 10:01AM
Many thanks Nathan.
Burnsie
gaborfoto 4 1 United Kingdom
28 Nov 2012 11:56AM
I think, you can't show me Vanessa's beauty...
Shooting from this angle with 50mm (using fullframe camera body), modify the rates (left foot vs. models face).
Pose: a little bit shy, without full feminity. For me, it's just a "Sit down, right foot down to the carpet etc".
Kepp your eyes on details - missing nail on the rigth arm's fingers.
The crop is too narrow above and bottom.
And the lights! Your lights did not excite - not for me. Your picture - from your lights settings - too flat.

Sorry for my wrong English, I just moved to the UK.

I wish you good lights, and try again - your model is beautiful and very pretty.
BURNSIE 8 25 4 England
28 Nov 2012 2:21PM
Many thanks Gabor, lighting is an art that I am only at a starting point of any understanding and fully appreciate your point of view.
Regards
Burnsie

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