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Just a couple of people on the raised walkway at Bridlington harbour. Thought there was something in there isolation, the railings and the lamp post.
You will tell me.
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Thoughtful concept and good submissive p.o.v
An idea might be to convert this to mono , and let the image speak for itself.
Both mods work. I left them near the center because they were looking out of the frame, but accept your point on crop.
Sorry for falling foul of rules, Frank - I'm a bit lazy with the exif and rarely bother with aperture/shutter speed as I know what I did at the time - not ideal for the critique section. I would almost certainly be on aperture priority and f7.1 - my usual to get a shallow depth of field and fast shutter speed - ISO probably 400.
Hello, Paul. I agree that there is something in the couple's isolation, as well as in their relaxed and comtemplative manner. Simple and effective, less is more. I felt a different composition might work, so I have done a modification where I straightened the verticals, cropped both sides and added canvas to the top, resulting in a square format. I thought the extra sky might add to the feeling of isolation. I was looking for a portrait/vertical format but couldn't crop any more from the left because the couple are looking out of the frame. Then I tried a different approach for my second modification, and turned the couple around, so that I could crop some more off the right. I'm sure there are boundless possibilities with this image.
Your second mod is very good. Shows how well Photozine works - I had thought of doing this, but decided it was too much trouble - you have achieved a seamless mod and it is very much better than my original.
Just shows how we can all learn something here.
I hope you don't mind Paul but I have also submitted a mod. I love the composition but there were two things that were taking my focus.
The first was the bar on the right, which I have removed, but also the underside of the underside of the bridge - it was highlighted just a little too much for me.
I also tweaked the levels a little bring a bit more colour into the shot and darkened the shadows on the bars just a little more - they are a nice shadow and shadows should not be wasted!
I don't mind any mods. We can all learn and I would not put my pictures up for comment unless I could take it. Thanks for your comments - both are valid and improve my original.
Just realised the mistake in my message above - I am sure you know know what I meant - one underside too many hehe! "but also the underside of the bridge"
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