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Violet

By dusfim
Photographed on white paper. Camera used Nikon D7000. Lens using Sigma 18-250mm.

Tags: General Flowers and plants Still life photography

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dudler Plus
17 1.5k 1778 England
10 Jan 2021 10:35AM
Despite the fresh flowers and the brightness, there's a slight air of melancholy about this, I think.

The jug is facing out of the frame, away from the light... Towards the past, perhaps? And the composition is unbalanced, most of the weight on the left, again heading back.

And all of that is fine, if that's your intention: but it would be interesting to see a version heading the other way, forwards, optimistic, lip to the right, handle to the left. Maybe create a triangle with the three elements, and a bit more separation between them? Musing: it all depends on the look you want to achieve.
mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.5k 2346 United Kingdom
10 Jan 2021 11:30AM
I see the same hint of sadness as John here. It's a little bit like a swan gliding serenely into the past.

I wonder if you intended to create that mood? It's down to the direction of light as much as anything.
Moira
chase Plus
15 2.0k 517 England
10 Jan 2021 11:49AM
This is a really pretty vase Marion but my first thought was ' it needs to be flipped' with the light coming n from the left of the frame.
As is it is very left side heavy.
There are lots of darker blotches on the bg, whether from your sensor being dirty or on the bg is difficult to tell.

I did a mod...
Flipped
Added a light texture to cover the dark blotches, that is just personal taste.
Increased the canvas size to the right and cropped.
Cloned away some of the leaves right on the LHS of the frame.
The Butterfly was added simply to put a little interest in the top right, again, personal preference.

I really think you need to consider your composition here Mario, I see the shell as superfluous to the frame too but the rest of the subject matter is really nice.

banehawi Plus
16 2.4k 4202 Canada
10 Jan 2021 1:35PM
I like the violet colours.

I would level it, increase colour temp a little, and reframe it as done in the mod



Regards


Willie

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