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walking red

By meenaghans
photo from the louvre in paris

Tags: Red Walking Paris Effect Louvre Lamp post Portraits and people

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NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2011 6:24PM
Hello,
there is an awfull lot of atmoshpere here and the subject with the intrigueing figure is actually rather interesting but there are issues which prevent it from being the best image it could be.

the mysterious figure is merging with the shadows, the unusual flare over the streetlamp is fighting for attention and the red overall colour is not working forme, may work for others but im struggling with it and the whole lot of artifacts in the red sky. it looks like it was taken at vast iso in total darkness.

now im all for creativity and credit to you for that, because there is quite a bit about the shot i like, but the processing may well have been done better in a variety of ways.

under normal circumstances i would have suggested how to do alternatives, but the lack of data, the fact that i dont have access to the raw file would make that quite difficult without having a strarting point.

can i please suggest that if you request critique in the CG that you provide as much information as possible so the team can offer help in the right directions

regards
Phil

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27 Nov 2011 7:04PM
thanks for the info i will upload the original photo tomorrow as this one is done using retaculation filter in photoshop
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3556 Canada
27 Nov 2011 7:19PM
Stephen, is this a photo of a photo? Or a street shot?


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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3556 Canada
27 Nov 2011 7:30PM
Tried a mod. Can you provide the info Phil asked for also, - and what you intended when you applied a heavy red toning?


W
27 Nov 2011 8:01PM
it is a street shot cropd from a bigger hdr photo i will upload it tomorrow i was just trying random effects in photoshop then
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3556 Canada
27 Nov 2011 8:21PM
OK, tks for the info


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paulbroad 9 117 1075 United Kingdom
29 Nov 2011 3:26PM
I'm sorry. It's a try at something, but I must be getting old, can't really see what you were trying to achieve. Why would you want this result?

Paul

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