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water brollies

By williamsloan
taken at Bangor trying to practise

Tags: Humour and fun

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paulbroad 9 114 1048 United Kingdom
12 Mar 2012 12:08PM
Perfectly good record. To get the best from such as this you need to get in closer and fill the frame with backlit water - thus getting some twinkle and impact.

paul

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moglen Plus
9 14 1
12 Mar 2012 12:22PM
I'd crop it in alot more. get close, perhaps use your flash to add a twinkle to the shot. go back on a sunny day you'll see all the diference.
many thanks billy
Fefe Plus
4 23 31 United Kingdom
12 Mar 2012 12:49PM
I have done a mod for you. I cropped of the bg as much as possible and gave it more saturation and contrast, also a sharpen. Didn't remove any noise as this took out all the detail in the water making it appear smooth.
Diane
mhfore 9 6 176 England
12 Mar 2012 12:55PM
Hi Billy,

I think a tighter crop would work better but I would leave all three water features in. I have altered the exposure selectively and sharpened a touch. Billy who took this for you? I didn't have to level it Wink

Take care

Martin
thanks fefe and martin it shows i have been taking your advice

Billy

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