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Water Sport Pier

By arhab
This is water sport pier in Pangandaran beach west java. It's cloudly after the rain all night. Any comment and modification welcome.

Tags: Black and white Landscape and travel

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Coast 8 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
4 May 2013 8:46AM
Overall a pleasant scene. The mono conversion is an interesting choice and I imagine it suited the mood of the day with the dark clouds and rain you were experiencing.

I would lift the levels here to bring out the tones and the mod uploaded should demonstrate the difference for you. The original here is a little flat, overall very grey and little separation between tones. Using the sliders on the levels option you can maximise the range of tones captured by the sensor. A little burning in to darken down the sky to retain the detail in the clouds and the feeling of the weather and a little dodging to bring back some detail in the rocks in the left lower corner as I find this a little too dark a mass and becomes a distraction in the corner of the eye as you view the image.

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arhab 4 43 2 Indonesia
12 May 2013 3:59AM
Thank you Paul , an interesting mod. you are right, mine is flat and there is a little separation between tones.

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