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Wedding day

By IanGray
Pre-Wedding preparation on Keeley's special day

Tags: Fashion Black and white Wedding and social Portraits and people

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cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
13 Apr 2010 10:47PM
she looks a little apprehensive about it all

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Carabosse 15 41.1k 270 England
13 Apr 2010 10:58PM
I agree with Jeff - she look a bit unhappy on the 'happiest day of her life'! Grin But, hey this reflects reality... and is therefore a realistic portrayal.

Photo look a touch flat. I have increased definition a bit with a levels adjustment and use of the shadows/highlights tool in the mod I've uploaded for you. I've also sued the spot healing brush to get rid of minor skin blemishes. Hope that helps.
13 Apr 2010 11:42PM
happy bride pictures sell. all others..... donīt.
period, end of story.
otherwise, good photo. good use a bit more sparkle.
banehawi Plus
13 1.8k 3881 Canada
14 Apr 2010 12:38AM
Theres been some good comments already, so I will add mine.

The pic is crooked, 0 the verticals shes in front of are way off.

Her expression is more wistful than sad, though a smile is definitely better.

It can do with a little more contrast, and Ive loaded a mod with straightening, sharpening, cropping to place her eyes on a third, - and tried to giver her a hint of a smile for fun.


paulbroad 10 123 1245 United Kingdom
14 Apr 2010 7:42AM
I'm afraid this one doesn't make it. All said above. was someone else actually taking a picture for which she was posing and you grabbed one from the side.

She does look rather miserable and not probably the ideal wedding shot. Also, as said, a bit flat.

IanGray 10 4 United Kingdom
14 Apr 2010 12:54PM
Thank you all for your input, I agree the verticals do look out now you have pointed it out, I was doing some wedding preperation shots for the bride and this was just before she was ready to leave. I thought this captured her in a moment of thought before she was about to leave for the church, this was never intended for the album as she was unaware I was taking the shot. Great feedback from you all.
Many thanks
DRicherby 9 269 725 United Kingdom
15 Apr 2010 10:49AM
Carabosse wrote:
> [...] I've also sued the spot healing brush [...]

A sad reflection on our litigious society. Wink

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