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Which Works?

By minicooper
A image of two young people at a friend's party. Just playing with crops and mondo any adivice is welcome.

Tags: General Portraits and people

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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gary_d 9 576 13 Wales
16 Nov 2008 11:08AM
I prefer v1. - gary

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16 Nov 2008 11:22AM
I think its a great photo! Have uploaded a mod for you!
If you had brought the subjects a little further forward, the curtains would be a little softer as a backdrop I softened these a little in the mod to show how it would look also if you had a small hand held flash gun you could have bounced your flash of of the ceiling this would have softened the shadows around the head area but all that said its still a lovely portrait well done!
banehawi Plus
13 1.6k 3722 Canada
16 Nov 2008 5:02PM
I like the monotone version, but I dont like the frame, - its too heavy and distracting. Would suggest a simple frame as in the mod.


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chuckspics 10 14 United States
16 Nov 2008 6:37PM
tried to resize the green but hope you like the mods, Chuck
29 Nov 2008 2:20PM
I like V1 and V3 great shot

Paul

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