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White II

By chase
Well, I did warn you Wink
Slightly different composition this time to include more of the table.
Still a texture added to the bg but marginally darker.
I wanted more of the grey tones on this one but not forgetting the shadows to ground the subjects and to show the shape of the table.

i was very surprised to see just how many shades of white there are on different objects.

Single Raw file converted in Lightroom, levels adjusted and texture added in Photoshop.

Thanks for dropping by.
Constructive critique and mods welcome.
Stay safe, be happy.
Janet xx

Tags: Cup White Still life Grey Texture Jug Three Table Saucer Teapot Shasta daisies

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Comments


12 Jun 2020 12:29PM
I like this one even better. I prefer the composition and think the texture makes it into a wall-worthy picture Smile
dudler Plus
17 1.5k 1805 England
12 Jun 2020 12:30PM
So delicate...
AlfieK Plus
4 1 1 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2020 12:48PM
I really enjoy these white on white setups. Well controlled exposure - excellent work.
Alfie
mrswoolybill Plus
14 2.6k 2371 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2020 12:52PM
I didn't comment on yesterday's my apologies - inertia is setting in big time here. I do prefer yesterday's, for various reasons. It has a clean simplicity, the texture layer seems to be gilding the lily although subtly done; the flower petals in particular are disadvantaged by it, I think. And the billowing wave of cloth on the right yesterday is more satisfying to my eye than the corner fold on the left here.
There is also a hint of shadow below the saucer in yesterday's which supports it - here the saucer seems to be floating in space.
An interesting exercise, it has made my brain work for a bit... Smile
Joline Plus
14 30 59 United States
12 Jun 2020 12:53PM
I like this even more than the first. The slightly darker tones allow the details to stand out without loosing the light overall effect.
White is truly an amazing color once one delves the depths of it.
TrevBatWCC Plus
12 13 17 England
12 Jun 2020 2:29PM
Another fine set up and capture, Janet 😃 Think I slightly prefer this of the two, has a little more definition to it👍
Trev 😀
chase Plus
15 2.1k 540 England
12 Jun 2020 2:33PM
Thanks everyone.
Joline, lovely to have your UA, many thanks.

I like both images, yesterdays and todays with no particular preference tbh, I would probably print them both out together with a third one and hang them on the wall as a set...yes, there is a third one to come, quite different though Wink

Janet xx
banehawi Plus
16 2.4k 4217 Canada
12 Jun 2020 2:58PM
Delicate whites. I cant shake the feeling that the jug is very slightly off level compared to pot and cup! Ill have to check my chair...


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Beautiful!
Carol
Daisymaye Plus
12 23 18 Canada
12 Jun 2020 4:30PM
I have to go check back with yesterdays. I know I loved it and I'm thinking from memory I may like yesterdays best. But this is still beautiful.
Daisymaye Plus
12 23 18 Canada
12 Jun 2020 4:33PM
It's the crisp clean whites in yesterdays and how the daisies are arranged. Yesterdays definitely for me. It's very high key but still pops.
saltireblue Plus
10 11.6k 71 Norway
12 Jun 2020 4:52PM
I prefer yesterday's, Janet - the light and the arrangement without the distracting table corner appeals more.
Just my opinion - others are available.GrinGrin
12 Jun 2020 5:15PM
Simple shot but a lot harder than it looks ! Great technique
12 Jun 2020 5:57PM
Very innovative again. Your presentation brought this song to mind.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VZqPoriYXho
David
chase Plus
15 2.1k 540 England
12 Jun 2020 6:02PM
Thanks all.
David that is a classic song, originally by Procul Harum.
Malc, you are so entitled to your opinion and I thank you for it, I am still on the fence Wink

Alfie, Steve and David, wonderful compliments to have your UAs, many thanks.
Janet xx
Irishkate Plus
10 44 118 United Kingdom
12 Jun 2020 10:30PM
High key, high tea.

KateGrin
12 Jun 2020 11:40PM
Stunning work Janet..Lin
Alffoto Plus
6 238 1 United Kingdom
13 Jun 2020 12:27AM
Love this high key image, beautifully presented!

Alf
chase Plus
15 2.1k 540 England
13 Jun 2020 7:03AM
Thanks everyone.
Many thanks for your UA Alf, very much appreciated.
Janet xx
13 Jun 2020 8:18AM
Like both of them very much, but if I have to choose it would be yesterday's - hard to give a precise reason...
Excellent !
David
bliba Plus
15 2 Austria
16 Jun 2020 11:15AM
great processing

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