Back Modifications (3)
Views: 52 (27 Unique)  Award Shortlist   

Whitehall Tree

By AndyD999
As soon as i drove past this today my mind automatically said that it would look great in black and white. I used a tripod and shot the picture a few times. I then used photoshop to clone out a few ugly branches that detracted form the shape of the tree and used curves to really enhance the clouds.

Tags: General Black and white Specialist and abstract Flowers and plants Digitally manipulated Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

Take your photography to the next level and beyond...

  • NEWS
  • REVIEWS
  • INSPIRATION
  • COMMUNITY
  • COMPETITIONS

Why not join for free today?

Join for Free

Your total photography experience starts here


This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

Comments


thatmanbrian 5 342 3 Spain
24 Nov 2011 3:32PM
A good image. Maybe the clouds behind the tree are too dark and reduce the impact of the silhuette? It needs to pop out more I think.

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

24 Nov 2011 5:01PM
Nice Image, would make a great postcard, I agree with the above clouds maybe a tad dark, try lightining them up a bit with your dodge/burn tool Smile
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2011 5:41PM
Idea and composition great but it is too heavy. You need the sky several shades lighter whilst retaining detail. Not sure, obviously, how you convert to mono, but the only decent way is with access to at least red, green and blue channels to achieve the desired mono tones.

Paul
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3512 Canada
24 Nov 2011 5:57PM
I agree with Paul on all his points here Andy. I have uploaded a mod that makes this a black and white imge, rather than a black and grey image, and this makes white = white. Ive also cropped and flipped it left to right, - might look better.

Experiment with the Channel Mixer in Photoshop to get the mono output looking better, - assuming you use photoshop. Your mod is better, but still a little short.

Depending on your sill level, you can do what I did, - I used threshold and curves to identify white, - you need a version of Photoshop that can do this, - anything above Elements will do.

heres a link:

http://www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=24


Its meant to remove colour casts, and works well to, but will work with mono to show what needs to be white and black also.


Hope this helps,


regards


Willie
AndyD999 4 43 6 England
24 Nov 2011 5:58PM
i have posted a mod taking on board what you said. as for how i convert i do it in Adobe raw so that i have access to all the different colours. i will go back and have another look at it form scratch. Thanks for your comments
AndyD999 4 43 6 England
25 Nov 2011 8:42AM
Willie,

Many thanks for your advice and the posting about threshold. I have just had a go and think its a great idea. Never knew you could do that. I have posted another mod using threshold and would really like to know what you think. As for the crop and flip i have stuck with my version as i prefer it, but i guess that is the beauty of photography in that everyone has there own opinions.

Many thanks
Andy
thatmanbrian 5 342 3 Spain
25 Nov 2011 10:30AM
Got it - that mod now makes the tree contrast nicely with the sky. Well done!

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.