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Whitsand Bay

By James_C
Thanks to everybody for your c+c and support for my last upload. This next one I took whilst on the beach on a very grey day and decided the best thing to do was drop the saturation to almost nil. I then adjusted the brightness and contrast of the rocks and sky seperately. before having a final play. Not being happy with the proportions of the final image I stretched it a little before posting. Now I'm not so sure so am posting both.

I have added as v3, for those of you who may be interested, the original uneditted photograph.

Do please criticise - it will help me to learn and see things in different ways.

Thanks for looking - I hope you like it.

James

Tags: Black and white Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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Comments


21 Aug 2009 6:31PM
I am going for V2
Mono works well for me but would like to see it in colour as well

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21 Aug 2009 6:32PM
V1 for me. Great presentation and monochrome effect - a powerful image.
David
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
21 Aug 2009 6:37PM
Thank you Barbara and David. I might put a colour version up as a seperate posting Barbara - still thinking on that one.

James
21 Aug 2009 7:28PM
You've chosen a great place to photograph,James. not an easy subject, but you've captured great mood, making a strong image,fine work, Adrian
RTDS 7 Cyprus
22 Aug 2009 7:11AM
Great images and mono works very well.
V2 is my fav.
Robert
22 Aug 2009 7:28AM
All lovely images, very nice indeed !

Chris
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
22 Aug 2009 7:32AM
Many thanks your kind comments Adrian, Robert and Chris.

James
22 Aug 2009 8:23AM
Nice images.
22 Aug 2009 9:24AM
like this one , great shot
sally
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
22 Aug 2009 9:58AM
Thanks xxx and Sally. Your comments and votes are appreciated.

James
cassiecat 8 39 46 England
22 Aug 2009 11:30AM
definately v1 for me lovely comp. feels it could use abit more oomph with added contrast.lesley
Joline Plus
10 27 53 United States
22 Aug 2009 12:18PM
I like v1. As a suggestion, you could selectively choose the sky and then use a noise suppression filter. This would eliminate the grain (noise) in the sky. I like the mono and the composition very much.
Iain_Proudfoot 10 40 2 Ireland
22 Aug 2009 12:24PM
A great photograph.

Warm wishes, Iain.
Rende Plus
9 38 4 Netherlands
23 Aug 2009 11:37AM
Lovely composition with beautiful tones. I prefer V1.
Thank you fot your cropping suggestion. I also have a portrait format version of the scene, that does what you suggested, but for some reason it looses something.
Regards,
Rende
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
23 Aug 2009 1:17PM
Many thanks Leslie,Iain and Rende and thank you Joline for your very helpful advice.

James
gingerdelight 10 298 11 United Kingdom
23 Aug 2009 4:21PM
A lovely image James. I prefer V1, and just by posting the colour version shows how much better it looks for the crop, frame, etc. Lovely presentation.
x Carol x
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
23 Aug 2009 4:25PM
Thank you very much Carol.

James
losbarbados 7 236 United Kingdom
24 Aug 2009 7:11AM
V1 is a very good picture, It is composed well and the small amount of stretching out from v2 enhances the image.
(I'd never thought of reducing the saturation - it's always been all or nothing for me in the past - thanks for the tip, I may give that a try in the future.)
James_C 7 36 56 United Kingdom
24 Aug 2009 7:23AM
Thanks Andy, and I'm pleased to have been of help to you.

James
SFd 8 10 United Kingdom
26 Aug 2009 9:51AM
I do like this in mono but then I love black and white images generally.

Steve
MHJ 7 1 Wales
16 Sep 2009 6:35PM
I am a big fan of black and white images too, the light and the detail are particularly nice here

Marian
mrjt 10 United Kingdom
6 Sep 2010 4:38PM
A well processed set of images...Jack

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