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21 Nov 2008 9:01AM
Super dupa whooper!

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Nice capture, love the pose.
LinH Plus
9 10 United Kingdom
21 Nov 2008 9:26AM
knew it would look great bigger
Tooth Plus
11 5.8k 227 Ireland
21 Nov 2008 9:03PM
that's a better size since yeaterdays..assuming you still ant the critique, it's a lovely pose, just a few niggles..

I'd suggest cropping a bit from the right to put the swan a wee bitless central with room on the left to move into the shot..the exposures, not a bad effort for vry hrash contrasty light conditions but there's a danger of some burning out to white in the bright areas of the neck and (swan's) right wing - a little play with curves might pull the bright areas in a little bit if you're up to that.
finally, it's a little bit soft looking. is the original sharper than this? if so it's quite possibly been softened by the uplod process - try a final low-level sharpen on the prepared image for upload as the last thing before you upload it

Amnyway, hope that's some use, thanks for getting back

Thanks all for your comments and Stephen thanks for your tips will try them out in lightroom

fentiger Plus
15 916 23 England
24 Nov 2008 8:09AM
A well timed capture and good advice from Stephen.


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