your framing and eye contact are good but the image is dark, so losing some of the detail. Also there appears to be loss of sharpness which could be camera shake (I suspect) or slight mis-focus.
Its got the potential to be a good image so its worth having another go at something similar
your framing and eye contact are good but the image is dark, so losing some of the detail. Also there appears to be loss of sharpness which could be camera shake (I suspect) or slight mis-focus.
Its got the potential to be a good image so its worth having another go at something similar