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wildlife/nature

By shydallah
moment of love.by-shahidullah
critique-focus,composition and expossure

Tags: Wildlifeandnature Wildlife and nature

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Composition works, great color.....focus a little soft.

Peter

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9 Nov 2013 12:33PM
hi,peter,thanks for coment.the camera i used that was sx20 canon.picture soft focus.so changed that within short time.
best regards-shahidullah
mrswoolybill Plus
9 965 1492 United Kingdom
9 Nov 2013 2:25PM
The exposure is good, the colours are gorgeous. I've uploaded a Mod with a bit of Unsharp mask applied, and that white dot on the right removed.
I've had a look at a few online reviews of your camera and they all mention softness of focus, don't add to that in-camera! Check if your software will allow you to add some softness afterwards if you want to.
Moira
paulbroad 9 116 1056 United Kingdom
9 Nov 2013 4:11PM
Are you saying you added soft focus? Really not a good idea with this type of image, it needs to be sharp. Very sharp. It is colourful and quite pleasant but I would prefer better resolution on the main insects. The best way is to be side on to them, above if the wings are spread.

Paul

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