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Winter sleep

By Marioks
I saw this tree while driving today. Thought it could be a decent picture, so I made few shots. I hope it turned out good. Sky was very cloudy.

Tags: Wildlife and nature

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banehawi Plus
17 2.6k 4274 Canada
7 Dec 2012 8:20PM
Hi Marius. Its a nice shot, like that road curving. But the snow is blue. This happens to most people, - its not you!. When taking a shot that mostly white, or mostly snow, you need to dial in +1 in general. You did try +1/3, but its not enough.

Also, try to use an aperture thats one or two below your maximum, 0 for this perhaps f/5.6 or f/8, - you will get better performance from the lens, though you would have had to double the ISO.


I have uploaded a mod, - mainly increased exposure by about 2/3, cropped a little from the top, and added a little to the right to balance.



Regards


Willie
Marioks 9 3
7 Dec 2012 8:58PM
Your mod looks way better. Suggestions noted.
DalesLass Plus
10 3.5k United Kingdom
7 Dec 2012 9:44PM
A lovely composition. I think the cloudy sky makes for a nice backdrop behind the tree. Amazing the difference a little exposure compensation makes!

Jude
pamelajean Plus
15 1.6k 2238 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2012 5:28PM
You were right, Marius, this tree made a great subject.
The snow on the wispy new branches is so delicate, and there is just a hint of colour within the tree bark.
I think you have composed it beautifully, and Willie's very nice modification shows how it can be improved.
Pamela.
paulbroad 14 131 1293 United Kingdom
8 Dec 2012 9:03PM
Willie co vers it. You do have some jpg compression artifacts in the sky. Like circular banding. Need less compression.

Paul

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